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[aid] => mick
[title] => an observation
[time] => 2004-03-22 18:49:08
[hometext] => this woman has no genuine beauty in her soul... her heart will never be sated; but shes not so complicated.
[bodytext] => she promised him the skies; but her words were all lies,
he loved her with all his heart; she tore his world apart,
she was not faithful to him, agony and pain she did bring,
from her home across the sea, she writes him anyway,
she only comes to haunt him, its his mind she wants to win,
supposedly she has another; a rebound replacement lover,
he won't last long either, it is a shame she'll give neither,
anymore than heartache; her prevaricating truth is opaque,
never gives her whole heart and soul, all she wants is control,
twisting men's soul's every which way, for her it is childsplay,
she has to be the very best, won't give their heart a rest,
she will gladly sing, interested in what a new man might bring,
with her lying schemes, she invades their lives and dreams,
this man's gone on with his life, taken for himself a wife,
so why now surfacing this old flame, tells all she's not to blame,
she likes walking in the rain, it's all about what she will gain,
dreaming her happy fairytales, then sadly whines and wails,
she'll swear, she's much more meaningful than devil may care,
since love is only just a game to her, men's sighs make her purr,
she is a psychic vampyre; no more no less, pity they love her.
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[informant] => ladyfawn
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[ratings] => 17
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an observation
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 06:49:08 PM in AEST
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she promised him the skies; but her words were all lies,
he loved her with all his heart; she tore his world apart,
she was not faithful to him, agony and pain she did bring,
from her home across the sea, she writes him anyway,
she only comes to haunt him, its his mind she wants to win,
supposedly she has another; a rebound replacement lover,
he won't last long either, it is a shame she'll give neither,
anymore than heartache; her prevaricating truth is opaque,
never gives her whole heart and soul, all she wants is control,
twisting men's soul's every which way, for her it is childsplay,
she has to be the very best, won't give their heart a rest,
she will gladly sing, interested in what a new man might bring,
with her lying schemes, she invades their lives and dreams,
this man's gone on with his life, taken for himself a wife,
so why now surfacing this old flame, tells all she's not to blame,
she likes walking in the rain, it's all about what she will gain,
dreaming her happy fairytales, then sadly whines and wails,
she'll swear, she's much more meaningful than devil may care,
since love is only just a game to her, men's sighs make her purr,
she is a psychic vampyre; no more no less, pity they love her.
§* *§
*|*
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Re: an observation
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by Kie on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 07:24:26 PM AEST
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| People like that not only boggle my mind, they just repulse me. It is like a carnivore of men or something. How sad to do something so cruel and to be honest I had never thought on it before. Thank you so much for this one Ness. Kie |
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Re: an observation
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 07:33:39 PM AEST
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I think people like this must have very low self-esteem and need a lot of attention to fill in the emptiness. Like a child that does not get the attention they need, they will get it one way or the other, even if it means misbehaving. It is sad, but this happens with men and women. They are just so needy they will stop at nothing.
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Re: an observation
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 08:55:09 PM AEST
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Great read. Very descriptive - in fact, I think you've described this person in a previous poem, if I'm not mistaken.
She gets you writing good poems, I'll give her that much . . . *winks* |
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Re: an observation
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by shelby on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 10:13:16 PM AEST
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each word wrapped me up Nessa its sad there are people(woman as well out there) who will do these things to others.
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Re: an observation
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:03:21 PM AEST
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A poem with anger, a twang of knowing your intended target. I have seen poems like this before from you, they never seem to miss the mark.
tt
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Re: an observation
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:36:09 PM AEST
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| Nessa, I liked this. Very good write my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: an observation
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:50:35 AM AEST
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your right LOVE isnt a game,,or a fool's game,,
it's cherished with life,,,
a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: an observation
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:23:25 PM AEST
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ouchies---- what a twisted web is weaved when love and lust are interleaved - and all is naught but fraught with lies and then it ends with tearful eyes -
I sound like norm lol.
this write has a sting to it;
merry
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Re: an observation
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:21:27 PM AEST
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People like this are very sick. They have no real feelings......dropped them somewhere in their past.......probably after they were extremely hurt. Vowed it would never happen again.....so they just pretend,
Poor people that come in contact tho.....they really appear to be geniune.....and break hearts right and left! Sort of like Witchcraft. I've seen it happen time and again....my former was one of them. Really bad news people! Stear clear of them
love you
wonderful poem
consue |
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Re: an observation
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:37:11 PM AEST
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true, there our some twisted people out there (not me of course my mum said i was wonderful!) again you've hit the nail on the head with another marvelous piece of work.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: an observation
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:59:32 PM AEST
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Amazing what some people will do.... Good write....
Hugs
Jenni |
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