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Array ( [sid] => 3981 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Immortal [time] => 2002-09-18 16:27:57 [hometext] => For those who have lost someone they have loved and yet love, don't be ashamed or afraid to embrace that gental and loving spirit
latent in the heart, just remember and smile. [bodytext] => A crescendo of cries
Permeate the sky
Beneath the pail radiant moon
Shadows drape the sloppy lawn
Pillows of immortal icons
Adorn the many tombs
And there beneath the sod
Decay's the mortal heart
Kith and kin bereaved
O vibrant souls of sorrow great
Apt to share this gloomy fate
Love alone can we reprieve.
It thrives in the heart and mind
Eliven the memories left behind
When we're called to be nigh.
To all who find this poem to read
Death is the finality we achieve
But real love never dies. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 11 [informant] => gitty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Love Immortal

Contributed by gitty on Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 04:27:57 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

A crescendo of cries
Permeate the sky
Beneath the pail radiant moon
Shadows drape the sloppy lawn
Pillows of immortal icons
Adorn the many tombs
And there beneath the sod
Decay's the mortal heart
Kith and kin bereaved
O vibrant souls of sorrow great
Apt to share this gloomy fate
Love alone can we reprieve.
It thrives in the heart and mind
Eliven the memories left behind
When we're called to be nigh.
To all who find this poem to read
Death is the finality we achieve
But real love never dies.

Copyright © gitty ... [ 2002-09-18 16:27:57]
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Re: Love Immortal (User Rating: 1 )
by isaiyan on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 09:29:19 AM AEST
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interesting poem, nicely written...

death hits everyone hard...

Re: Love Immortal (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 04:31:18 AM AEST
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great write Gitty,

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