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Array ( [sid] => 39772 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CIRCLE OF LIFE [time] => 2004-03-22 14:17:14 [hometext] => As we live our lives, we soon realize it can be like an optical illustion. What we see we may not get, and even regret. How do we get past the illusion, so we can leave behind something so no one will forget? [bodytext] =>

'CIRCLE OF LIFE"

Optical illusion, our circle of life.
Pendulum masters, guiders of our life's outcome?
Carefully planned good, or uncontrolled strife?
Constant merry -go- 'round, jumping for your freedom?

"Peer pressue," unforseen circumstances, all 'round!
Optical illusion is life, what you dream, not found?
Whirling, Twirling, Twisting, Curling Circle.....
Sacrificing o'r, and o'r...fearful, dreaded cycle!

Lines may be drawn, as life goes 'round and 'round.
Sharp curves, screeching brakes, horrible sound
Life goes faster and faster, there's no slowing down!
Freedoms are threatened, your life is shutdown!

What goes around, comes back around to you
Circle of Life is your choice, genuinely true.
Unending circles always bend, seeing yours in view.
Predictable, premeditated, treatment of others, "You."

Circle your life, make a slow judgment of "You."
Kind hearts attract those with like hearts view.
Again, a full circle, what kind of heart do you project?
Hearts buried deeply to protect, or open heart's to detect?

Merry-go-rounds of life must pause for introspect.
Hurting hearts, not one has escaped this hurtful affect!
Wounds can be healed as your circle is completed
Slow down for the curves, each curve a year dated.

Simple "Golden Rule" goes around too!
"Do until others as you, would have them do to you!"
And when the trips around your Circle are through.....
Will your "Circle of Life" vindicate your life's view?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Negative thoughts are like birds, you can't
keep them from flying around your head,
but you can keep them from building nests
in your hair!"
~Kenneth Hagin~

*Positive Smiles*

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
March 21, 2004




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CIRCLE OF LIFE

Contributed by lovingcritters on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 02:17:14 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems





'CIRCLE OF LIFE"

Optical illusion, our circle of life.
Pendulum masters, guiders of our life's outcome?
Carefully planned good, or uncontrolled strife?
Constant merry -go- 'round, jumping for your freedom?

"Peer pressue," unforseen circumstances, all 'round!
Optical illusion is life, what you dream, not found?
Whirling, Twirling, Twisting, Curling Circle.....
Sacrificing o'r, and o'r...fearful, dreaded cycle!

Lines may be drawn, as life goes 'round and 'round.
Sharp curves, screeching brakes, horrible sound
Life goes faster and faster, there's no slowing down!
Freedoms are threatened, your life is shutdown!

What goes around, comes back around to you
Circle of Life is your choice, genuinely true.
Unending circles always bend, seeing yours in view.
Predictable, premeditated, treatment of others, "You."

Circle your life, make a slow judgment of "You."
Kind hearts attract those with like hearts view.
Again, a full circle, what kind of heart do you project?
Hearts buried deeply to protect, or open heart's to detect?

Merry-go-rounds of life must pause for introspect.
Hurting hearts, not one has escaped this hurtful affect!
Wounds can be healed as your circle is completed
Slow down for the curves, each curve a year dated.

Simple "Golden Rule" goes around too!
"Do until others as you, would have them do to you!"
And when the trips around your Circle are through.....
Will your "Circle of Life" vindicate your life's view?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Negative thoughts are like birds, you can't
keep them from flying around your head,
but you can keep them from building nests
in your hair!"
~Kenneth Hagin~

*Positive Smiles*

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
March 21, 2004








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Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 02:34:59 PM AEST
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Connie, this is excellent. Yes, we are all in control of our own 'circle'. Don't put anything out there in your circle you would not like to return to you. Choices, choices, choices and a little forethought and common sense can make a big difference in the 'boomerange effect' that can and does generally happen.

Rita


Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 02:38:04 PM AEST
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Well done a complete circle of life a fantastic vision. The longer I live the more I see of what you have so well written. thanks from bernard.


Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 05:02:35 PM AEST
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Absoluteely beautiful...well done, Cinnie....
Hugs
Jenni


Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 07:08:37 PM AEST
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connie, this is beautiful, keep writing my friend, hugs n' love nessa


Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:41:01 PM AEST
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Critters, this is quite the write you got yourself here. Made my mind go at a thousand paces. *S* Cynthia


Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:45:58 PM AEST
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Hi Mom,
This is great and oh so true.
luv, huggs, your brat,
emy


Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:30:10 PM AEST
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I had this one
this roundly thought
and round and round
did I go..

a kaleidoscope of thoughts this merry go round ride you have given to us. SO many truths, wisdom and lore...but it does has a dizzying effect as if I am spinning too fast by the currents of life...




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