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Array ( [sid] => 39764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => They Rip Me Into Me. [time] => 2004-03-22 13:17:18 [hometext] => Ha! i wrote this the lesson before i bunked off... they nicked some thing out the canteen today! should i be one of them do you think? [bodytext] => a sudden vibration of thoughts shoots through me,
it leaves me in pain!
my scars send old pain through me,
it's all starting again.

my walls are breaking around me now,
the friends i thought i had just make me feel down.
they do bad things that i don't want to do,
but i have to be one of them too.
wjen they do really bad things it makes me want to screem.
'coz being one of them just don't wash through me! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 65 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

They Rip Me Into Me.

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 01:17:18 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

a sudden vibration of thoughts shoots through me,
it leaves me in pain!
my scars send old pain through me,
it's all starting again.

my walls are breaking around me now,
the friends i thought i had just make me feel down.
they do bad things that i don't want to do,
but i have to be one of them too.
wjen they do really bad things it makes me want to screem.
'coz being one of them just don't wash through me!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-03-22 13:17:18]
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Re: They Rip Me Into Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:39:48 PM AEST
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this is harsh but here it goes: your obviously a weak person for hanging around with them in the first place, your obviously stupid for asking people opnions if you should join them well duh no!!! oh but you might as well society has no place for weaklings like you we need good strong people who know their minds. sorry

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