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Array ( [sid] => 39631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Exhalation [time] => 2004-03-21 16:02:50 [hometext] => An exhalation of thoughts upon moments spent on pondering the infinite. [bodytext] => To steal a gaze of the
supreme,
to catch a glimpse of
infinite power.

Lose yourself in the
sublime,
raise your worhip to
ultimate rapture.

Upon higher plains clear
pristine,
decked by spiritual
crystalline sculptures.

Following in the steps of the
seraphin,
in the blessed wake of
angelic messengers.

Reaching the plains of the
enlightened,
listening to the music of
divine whispers.

Beginning the steep and silent
ascend,
climbing the steps of
celestial ladders.

Arriving at the tiers peaceful
serene,
of gentle sleep and
eternal slumber.

In the gardens of fabled
Eden,
in the golden chambers of
God's utopia. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 43 [informant] => baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Exhalation

Contributed by baronhawk on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:02:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

To steal a gaze of the
supreme,
to catch a glimpse of
infinite power.

Lose yourself in the
sublime,
raise your worhip to
ultimate rapture.

Upon higher plains clear
pristine,
decked by spiritual
crystalline sculptures.

Following in the steps of the
seraphin,
in the blessed wake of
angelic messengers.

Reaching the plains of the
enlightened,
listening to the music of
divine whispers.

Beginning the steep and silent
ascend,
climbing the steps of
celestial ladders.

Arriving at the tiers peaceful
serene,
of gentle sleep and
eternal slumber.

In the gardens of fabled
Eden,
in the golden chambers of
God's utopia.

Copyright © baronhawk ... [ 2004-03-21 16:02:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Exhalation (User Rating: 1 )
by jLo on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:08:56 PM AEST
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Nicely written keep up the great poetry.......
jLo

Re: Exhalation (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 08:21:55 PM AEST
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This poem has left me without words. It was so beautiful, deep, thought provoking and magnificient that I struggle to come up with a decent comment. I am in awe of this one. I also commend you for it was excellent! Kie

Re: Exhalation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:05:23 PM AEST
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Well, for a minute there I had to remember who was writing this. It had a Venkat feel to it. Yes, infinite thoughts no doubt. But who is to say we stop at Eden. Why would the spark that made us live extinguish upon death. Why would it not flame again as another soul later in time as needed?

Rita

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