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Array ( [sid] => 39582 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A RELATIONSHIP GONE WRONG [time] => 2004-03-21 09:12:23 [hometext] => THIS IS ABOUT A RELATIONSHIP GONE WRONG...BEING YOUNG AND HOPING THE FATHER OF OUR CHILDREN WILL SET EXAMPLES AND DO THE RIGHT THING ..OFTEN IT'S NOT THE CASE..ITS FINDING STRENGTH TO GET RID OF DEAD WEIGHT IN YOUR LIFE (NO GOOD DADDY)..YOU WILL BE FREE. [bodytext] => What is about you that I just can't stand,
your nothing not even a man.
I was drawn to the fact that you were a loner too,
I don't know what made me stay with you.
It was really nice at first I won't lie,
but I grew tired of you as time went by.
A son and a daughter is all I got from you,
that's the only good thing that you did do.
You followed the footsteps of the wrong person,
and that's when things started to worsen.
Your drinking started getting out of hand,
and then the drugs were much more than I could stand.
You started almost living away from home,
don't get me wrong I'm glad you were gone.
The strange people always showing up and hanging out,
that's not what I wanted my life to be about.
It was over long before I put you out,
it was the best thing I could of done without a doubt.
There was never any real passion between you and I,
and that's just being real that ain't no lie.
There was nothing that we could work out
drugs seemed all you cared about.
Your own kids are even ashamed that your their dad,
you ain't nothing but a drug addict living real bad.
I still wonder why I even stayed with you, how could that be,
that part will always be a mystery to me
but my kids were young and didn't have to see,
all the misery you were bringing on me.
So with their futures in mind you had to go
and mentally and emotionally I did grow.
And now my life is void of all that mess
no more you no more stress.
You are simply a useless man without any hope
just living your life chasing dope.
In and out of jail because of stupid choices you make
I do pray you seek help for your own sake.
As for me and my children we will be okay
because I have God to help me through each day.

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A RELATIONSHIP GONE WRONG

Contributed by desire on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:12:23 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



What is about you that I just can't stand,
your nothing not even a man.
I was drawn to the fact that you were a loner too,
I don't know what made me stay with you.
It was really nice at first I won't lie,
but I grew tired of you as time went by.
A son and a daughter is all I got from you,
that's the only good thing that you did do.
You followed the footsteps of the wrong person,
and that's when things started to worsen.
Your drinking started getting out of hand,
and then the drugs were much more than I could stand.
You started almost living away from home,
don't get me wrong I'm glad you were gone.
The strange people always showing up and hanging out,
that's not what I wanted my life to be about.
It was over long before I put you out,
it was the best thing I could of done without a doubt.
There was never any real passion between you and I,
and that's just being real that ain't no lie.
There was nothing that we could work out
drugs seemed all you cared about.
Your own kids are even ashamed that your their dad,
you ain't nothing but a drug addict living real bad.
I still wonder why I even stayed with you, how could that be,
that part will always be a mystery to me
but my kids were young and didn't have to see,
all the misery you were bringing on me.
So with their futures in mind you had to go
and mentally and emotionally I did grow.
And now my life is void of all that mess
no more you no more stress.
You are simply a useless man without any hope
just living your life chasing dope.
In and out of jail because of stupid choices you make
I do pray you seek help for your own sake.
As for me and my children we will be okay
because I have God to help me through each day.





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Re: A RELATIONSHIP GONE WRONG (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:03:36 AM AEST
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What a sad bitter poem!!! I'm so sorry to read about your terrible past. Best wishes for your present and future. Great write!
Anne :D


Re: A RELATIONSHIP GONE WRONG (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:48:59 AM AEST
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May God be with you always. I'm sure He is...Russ


Re: A RELATIONSHIP GONE WRONG (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:34:29 AM AEST
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Got no sorry feelings for you.. but great sorry feelings for him(judging!). I had to judge cause this is a moral lesson to all. What great work of art friend.




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