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Array ( [sid] => 39498 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => We're Through [time] => 2004-03-20 16:23:09 [hometext] => The first love i had, tore my heart when she lied about how she really felt.. [bodytext] => To look upon your face
To your smile, its such grace
To be near you is like heaven in this place

I told you I loved you
I know that its true
And that you dont too
Maybe I should'ny have told you
Cause to you we're through

You dont want me to talk, amile, or look at you
You tell your friends to tell me
Not to look at the angel i see,
The one you seem to be

It hurts to tell you how I really feel,
You act like its nothing, Its no big deal
Its not even real

Now I have lost you
Cause we're through
My heart was complete, full of love and joy
Now its in pieces, flowing sadness,
Like a broken toy

You cant put it back together
Theres to many peices
It will be broken forever

My love for you,
You havent a single clue [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 22 [informant] => willow_tara72002 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

We're Through

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:23:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

To look upon your face
To your smile, its such grace
To be near you is like heaven in this place

I told you I loved you
I know that its true
And that you dont too
Maybe I should'ny have told you
Cause to you we're through

You dont want me to talk, amile, or look at you
You tell your friends to tell me
Not to look at the angel i see,
The one you seem to be

It hurts to tell you how I really feel,
You act like its nothing, Its no big deal
Its not even real

Now I have lost you
Cause we're through
My heart was complete, full of love and joy
Now its in pieces, flowing sadness,
Like a broken toy

You cant put it back together
Theres to many peices
It will be broken forever

My love for you,
You havent a single clue

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-03-20 16:23:09]
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Re: We're Through (User Rating: 1 )
by Insomnia_InfiniteSadness on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:56:46 AM AEST
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I cant believe no one has commented on this, i can relate to so much of this poem, the pain a lie causes, 'To your smile, its such grace', a true smile is the most beautiful thing, regret, anger, wanting others to understand.

Re: We're Through (User Rating: 1 )
by satanssecret1369 on Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 12:19:14 PM AEST
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I know this feeling. It blows. Well expressed, though.

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