Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 16:28:44 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 3949 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Homage of Heart [time] => 2002-09-17 11:37:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Un-aware of it's direction,
least it cast an open flame,
between the midst of light and shadow,
it dares to dream the same,
it's course, a part of heritage,
a raw and open vault,
hence, it looks for solitude,
but lies neutral in its fault,
It's made of ridged edges,
a double risk, submerged,
therefore, its armor, is its structure,
its counterpart, unheard,
adaquate of equal balance,
it obtains to gather stones,
searching for its harbor,
to venture on its own,
Subdue'd by restless powers,
without an alibi,
it begins to choose its course,
likes and dislikes, pass it by,
It stands, as its own herald,
pursuing life alone,
its bondage, a benefactor,
emotions, ride its dome,
devoted, but direct, it lies a solid friend,
a sneek peek, at its travel,
its homage, can not end,
Blocked inside, of prefix,
it begs to find restraint,
as its lantern burns away,
it starts a new complaint,
first, it stands there motionless,
unchanging its design,
thusforth it tries, to hold its own,
but the flame is more divine,
hence, it should need a helper,
but dare it be exposed,
slamming into crying waters,
it opens it's own soul,
Equalizing trepass, it advances over time,
sprouting out from hidden walls,
its poised to search rewind,
A model of its own best friend,
it trips to find the key,
unlocking finally its own vault,
to display its inner seed,
A paradise advancing,
it walks with pros and cons,
no course to follow passage,
it just keeps moving on,
an ordamental melody,
it weighs the odds and ends,
its neutral state expires,
its finally met a friend,
its cornered in its harvest,
its outcry needs an end,
with one last look, it waves good-by,
and brings its wick anew,
nodoubt it also left its cries,
the day that I met you,
thusforth a whole, unite the pair,
a flame now burns, with two,
the moment of an upmost trail,
the vow is made, I do!
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 19 [informant] => Valerie_Pearson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
Homage of Heart

Contributed by Valerie_Pearson on Tuesday, 17th September 2002 @ 11:37:21 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



Un-aware of it's direction,
least it cast an open flame,
between the midst of light and shadow,
it dares to dream the same,
it's course, a part of heritage,
a raw and open vault,
hence, it looks for solitude,
but lies neutral in its fault,
It's made of ridged edges,
a double risk, submerged,
therefore, its armor, is its structure,
its counterpart, unheard,
adaquate of equal balance,
it obtains to gather stones,
searching for its harbor,
to venture on its own,
Subdue'd by restless powers,
without an alibi,
it begins to choose its course,
likes and dislikes, pass it by,
It stands, as its own herald,
pursuing life alone,
its bondage, a benefactor,
emotions, ride its dome,
devoted, but direct, it lies a solid friend,
a sneek peek, at its travel,
its homage, can not end,
Blocked inside, of prefix,
it begs to find restraint,
as its lantern burns away,
it starts a new complaint,
first, it stands there motionless,
unchanging its design,
thusforth it tries, to hold its own,
but the flame is more divine,
hence, it should need a helper,
but dare it be exposed,
slamming into crying waters,
it opens it's own soul,
Equalizing trepass, it advances over time,
sprouting out from hidden walls,
its poised to search rewind,
A model of its own best friend,
it trips to find the key,
unlocking finally its own vault,
to display its inner seed,
A paradise advancing,
it walks with pros and cons,
no course to follow passage,
it just keeps moving on,
an ordamental melody,
it weighs the odds and ends,
its neutral state expires,
its finally met a friend,
its cornered in its harvest,
its outcry needs an end,
with one last look, it waves good-by,
and brings its wick anew,
nodoubt it also left its cries,
the day that I met you,
thusforth a whole, unite the pair,
a flame now burns, with two,
the moment of an upmost trail,
the vow is made, I do!




Copyright © Valerie_Pearson ... [ 2002-09-17 11:37:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Homage of Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Tuesday, 17th September 2002 @ 12:11:01 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I soooo loved this...emotions running wild here...I was glued to it like cement all the way through and the ending blew me away it was so good...this is just.....GREAT!


Re: Homage of Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 17th September 2002 @ 01:32:57 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Great write, Val.... loved it..
Jenni


Re: Homage of Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 01:51:17 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is breathtaking work Valerie...as was Lia , I was transfixed..
Chrissie




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com