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Array ( [sid] => 39450 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take the time or not [time] => 2004-03-20 09:57:50 [hometext] => The right people will let me know in the end So we will see [bodytext] => Why take the time to read this poem
Why take the time to write or show them
Why take the time out of my own day
Why take the time you can't hear what I say

Yes my words you can read
But my words you can't feel
Its these words that I need
For me to feel real

So I take the time to write this poem
For those with the time to get to know him
Thats why I take the time out of my day
Because all of our time is fading away

Now my words you have read
All the words that I write
They're all meant to be said
But to say thems a fight

So I took the time to write one last poem
Don't take the time if you are below them
Don't take the time to read them OK
Don't take the time I'm gone anyway [comments] => 2 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SuicidalSon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Take the time or not

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 09:57:50 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Why take the time to read this poem
Why take the time to write or show them
Why take the time out of my own day
Why take the time you can't hear what I say

Yes my words you can read
But my words you can't feel
Its these words that I need
For me to feel real

So I take the time to write this poem
For those with the time to get to know him
Thats why I take the time out of my day
Because all of our time is fading away

Now my words you have read
All the words that I write
They're all meant to be said
But to say thems a fight

So I took the time to write one last poem
Don't take the time if you are below them
Don't take the time to read them OK
Don't take the time I'm gone anyway

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2004-03-20 09:57:50]
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Re: Take the time or not (User Rating: 1 )
by Demon_of_Blood on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 03:16:33 AM AEST
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Yay, i got the first comment. Hey, I liked this poem. Seriously. Sorry for the uncalled for bashing of your other poems by my brother. He has learned his lesson and it won't happen again. I checked out amerikantragedy. You guys look pretty cool. Do you have any demos or anything you could send?

Re: Take the time or not (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:36:05 PM AEST
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I'm glad that I take the time to read your poems... because alot of times when I read your poems I don't have to write my own, you express it all. Thanks for sharing yourself with me and the rest of the site. And I'm glad that I took the time to get to know you through your poems.

*J*

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