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My memory blank
Afraid to awaken
Time is forgotten
Forsaken by the darkness
The Silence breaks
Revealing the weakness
I havent lost touch with reality
Reality lost me
Love is foreign
Feelings are faint
All condemned by my Lost memory

My soul dwindles
Life force falls
Zero movement
Demonic Sounds
Silhouette rains upon me
Presence unwanted by the light
Left alone to be devoured
Suffication of the light
Breaking these chains
Seems impossible
Im lost in this
This everlasting Pain
Forced to endure this alone
False pride
False life
No one to help me through this
Im Losing my memory. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 303 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Omega [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Lost Memory

Contributed by Omega on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 02:53:29 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

*Lost Memory*

My memory blank
Afraid to awaken
Time is forgotten
Forsaken by the darkness
The Silence breaks
Revealing the weakness
I havent lost touch with reality
Reality lost me
Love is foreign
Feelings are faint
All condemned by my Lost memory

My soul dwindles
Life force falls
Zero movement
Demonic Sounds
Silhouette rains upon me
Presence unwanted by the light
Left alone to be devoured
Suffication of the light
Breaking these chains
Seems impossible
Im lost in this
This everlasting Pain
Forced to endure this alone
False pride
False life
No one to help me through this
Im Losing my memory.

Copyright © Omega ... [ 2004-03-20 02:53:29]
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Re: Lost Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Letting_Go on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:54:44 AM AEST
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Reality lost me - that was a good line. A totally good write. I can relate with the no one to help through this pain, but I sure ain't losing my memory. I wish it was something I could do. Reach out to yourself, you'll find away. Be there for yourself. If you won't be there for yourself first then who will follow? I wish life was fair but truth is it aint and it is hard. Convince yourself that you can do this and you will be able to do it. Takes time and effort. You can do it and you know it right? Good luck.

Re: Lost Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 07:23:05 AM AEST
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I really liked the flow of this poem. The poem is great! Shows all the bitterness and hurt the poet feels. Welcome to Y.P.D.C And keep it up ;)
Anne :D

Re: Lost Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:44:09 PM AEST
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I live here my friend, you could be very well describing by life...great write.

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