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Array ( [sid] => 39420 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The foolish pain of love [time] => 2004-03-20 01:04:24 [hometext] => Why do pain and love go hand and hand? Well this is my answer to the pains of a love lost. I give up on love, it seems to hurt me time and time again. Women.. Shesh!! :D MaJ [bodytext] => (Be Advised this is a long poem. Sry. MaJ..

-----_______---------

Everyday is the same
Take the pleasure with the pain
All these things you put me through
is never enough for you

Rain falls down like your alibi
Thought you held the stars in the sky
Till I found out your love
was all a lie

Pull your throughts from my brain
This is my fate
But you put this hate
in my eyes that drives me insane

I should have known my heart
would not get out alive
Heart dead, memories drowned
that is when you said good-bye

You threw my love in my face
Under your skin your wicked ways
Your sweetness never again I will taste
getting lost in your imoral maze

All of my weight
of all I dream
falls in me
escapes with my scream

Now these shadows that you see
are memories of me
The truth behind your eyes
are your darkest little lies

You looked at me as I was the fool
now you are the one drowning in this empty pool
What to do when you run out of lies
and no one cares for your cries

And in your world somewhere
do the memories rip and tear
I still have your words to lie to me
to fill the countless hours you left to me

I know no place to call my bed
But I know the pain of this thorny crown
If I could get these thoughts out of my head
My hands no longer would be bound

What I think, are thoughts unheard of
Homicidal cold-blooded murder
To much of this troubled information
causes my brain to become inebriated

When it rains it pours
Thunder and lightning
Your peaking through doors
I know you are frightened

Look into my eye
Every day you wakeup
I will make you wish
you would die

You are the one
one of the few I gave my love too
now you crushed it
and there is no saving you

You tried to hurt me
but you didn't finish
now you’re about to understand
the wrath of a scorned menace

I will hold you up
as you start falling
the lord aint coming for you
so might as well stop calling

Your life soon to be
turned to a pile of ash
you might as well enjoy it
while it still lasts

Lord help me changes my ways
show me a little mercy come judgment day
The pain of love made me this way
Yet my answer to pain and love is just a pen stroke away.
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The foolish pain of love

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 01:04:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



(Be Advised this is a long poem. Sry. MaJ..

-----_______---------

Everyday is the same
Take the pleasure with the pain
All these things you put me through
is never enough for you

Rain falls down like your alibi
Thought you held the stars in the sky
Till I found out your love
was all a lie

Pull your throughts from my brain
This is my fate
But you put this hate
in my eyes that drives me insane

I should have known my heart
would not get out alive
Heart dead, memories drowned
that is when you said good-bye

You threw my love in my face
Under your skin your wicked ways
Your sweetness never again I will taste
getting lost in your imoral maze

All of my weight
of all I dream
falls in me
escapes with my scream

Now these shadows that you see
are memories of me
The truth behind your eyes
are your darkest little lies

You looked at me as I was the fool
now you are the one drowning in this empty pool
What to do when you run out of lies
and no one cares for your cries

And in your world somewhere
do the memories rip and tear
I still have your words to lie to me
to fill the countless hours you left to me

I know no place to call my bed
But I know the pain of this thorny crown
If I could get these thoughts out of my head
My hands no longer would be bound

What I think, are thoughts unheard of
Homicidal cold-blooded murder
To much of this troubled information
causes my brain to become inebriated

When it rains it pours
Thunder and lightning
Your peaking through doors
I know you are frightened

Look into my eye
Every day you wakeup
I will make you wish
you would die

You are the one
one of the few I gave my love too
now you crushed it
and there is no saving you

You tried to hurt me
but you didn't finish
now you’re about to understand
the wrath of a scorned menace

I will hold you up
as you start falling
the lord aint coming for you
so might as well stop calling

Your life soon to be
turned to a pile of ash
you might as well enjoy it
while it still lasts

Lord help me changes my ways
show me a little mercy come judgment day
The pain of love made me this way
Yet my answer to pain and love is just a pen stroke away.




Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2004-03-20 01:04:24]
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Re: The foolish pain of love (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 07:21:08 AM AEST
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About the poem, Its really wonderfully written, it reeks bitterness, anger and hurt. The expressions are amazing. Well I hope that the Lord listens to your prayers and maybe find you true love so that you can forget of that person who did that to you. P.s not only women do hurtful things!!
Anne :D




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