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Array ( [sid] => 39404 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drops So Deep [time] => 2004-03-19 22:30:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My soul was a once happy place,
But after all that has conspires,
The land so fertile with warmth,
Went baron and cold,
The sky seemed to cloud,
The thunder roared,
When I was angry,
And lightining flashed,
When You hurt me,
And the clouds cried,
When I was so sad,
But once there was a bit of sun,
If only for a moment,
But it felt good,
I stand in a very deep pit,
With a rock for a roof,
This roof has a hole,
And look up is all I can do,
Drops so deep,
They seem like a water fall,
They all seem to pile up,
The pit is allmost full,
But I cant reach the hole,
Swimming so long,
I cant keep up,
So I just let go,
And sink,
The breath has left me,
Almost like life,
Has faded from my face, [comments] => 1 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Arius-Inues [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Drops So Deep

Contributed by Arius-Inues on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 10:30:06 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My soul was a once happy place,
But after all that has conspires,
The land so fertile with warmth,
Went baron and cold,
The sky seemed to cloud,
The thunder roared,
When I was angry,
And lightining flashed,
When You hurt me,
And the clouds cried,
When I was so sad,
But once there was a bit of sun,
If only for a moment,
But it felt good,
I stand in a very deep pit,
With a rock for a roof,
This roof has a hole,
And look up is all I can do,
Drops so deep,
They seem like a water fall,
They all seem to pile up,
The pit is allmost full,
But I cant reach the hole,
Swimming so long,
I cant keep up,
So I just let go,
And sink,
The breath has left me,
Almost like life,
Has faded from my face,

Copyright © Arius-Inues ... [ 2004-03-19 22:30:06]
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Re: Drops So Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Shadow on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 11:02:02 PM AEST
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Sorta paints a picutre of somone floating in a pool of water the light bounceing off there pale face. Silence consuming all. Good job!

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