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Array ( [sid] => 3938 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Changed Life [time] => 2002-09-17 11:21:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You should believe
Because the story is true
A life like yours
Was turned around and saved too
There was a young girl
Who knew nothing but hate
But by God’s grace
It all tuned into fate
This young girl
Would stay out late at night
Disobeying her parents
And causing so many fights
She wouldn’t listen to me
I know she wouldn’t listen to you
Because no matter what I said
She’d still do things that she wanted to
She didn’t care
If she was in the wrong
Because she didn’t think
There was a place for her to belong
Then it happened
On one rainy night
God turned her life around
Without starting a fight
This young girl
Had visions of love
From an awesome man
The God up above
From that rainy day on
This young girl lived a better life
Loving every person she saw
And throwing out the pain and strife
A happy life
Is what this girl needed
And in one night
God fought Satan and succeeded
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A Changed Life

Contributed by unpredictable on Tuesday, 17th September 2002 @ 11:21:33 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

You should believe
Because the story is true
A life like yours
Was turned around and saved too
There was a young girl
Who knew nothing but hate
But by God’s grace
It all tuned into fate
This young girl
Would stay out late at night
Disobeying her parents
And causing so many fights
She wouldn’t listen to me
I know she wouldn’t listen to you
Because no matter what I said
She’d still do things that she wanted to
She didn’t care
If she was in the wrong
Because she didn’t think
There was a place for her to belong
Then it happened
On one rainy night
God turned her life around
Without starting a fight
This young girl
Had visions of love
From an awesome man
The God up above
From that rainy day on
This young girl lived a better life
Loving every person she saw
And throwing out the pain and strife
A happy life
Is what this girl needed
And in one night
God fought Satan and succeeded

Copyright Â© unpredictable ... [ 2002-09-17 11:21:33]
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Re: A Changed Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 01:57:35 AM AEST
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Hey Unpredictable,

This is a very nice story, full of goodness of heart!
Well written

With love
Dean:-)

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