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Remember?
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:18:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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remember that bolt,
that makes your head jolt?
remember that pain,
while your locked in you're stain?
remember those crimes?
I'VE DONE MY TIME!
remember those whispers,
and all your melting blisters?
remember that hate,
when helps here, but it's too late?
remember those kids?
the kind that done in my head!
remember those dreams?
and never being picked for the school team?
remember being alone,
hated, unable to cope?
remember feeling so dried out?
even those that annoyed you, couldn't make you shout!
remember that rip! of my flesh!
remember those twirls?
that it leaves in your head??
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Re: Remember?
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by dolly_dagger on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 03:03:45 PM AEST
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excellent. i like the stain part and i empathise with the dried out bit.
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Re: Remember?
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by lildrama04 on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:05:13 PM AEST
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| hey I really liked this poem but you know what I think that maybe you need to seriouly get some help. I remember when I was in that stage in my life and my best friend in the entire life saved me from doing it when he found me in the bathroom at my school with a knife in my hand and I was bleeding. I remember cutting myself like you do now and please just hear me out I don't mean to be a ***** or anything but there is nothing in this world that you need to take your own life over. I'm serious I wish that I could end my life right now but I won't. I'm not that stupid. |
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