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Array ( [sid] => 39278 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fall Unseen [time] => 2004-03-19 01:05:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Fall Unseen

I tried to be unlike me.
I tried to be thee. (Repeat Chorus X2)

I didn't see
The unseen.
I got lost
In misery,
And forgot to use
Reason's means.

Love's useless
And so senseless.
It never ends,
And is never seen,
Because it's kept away
Unsought by thee.

Hate takes away
Every feeling,
And I lost thyself
To myself
Never regained again.

I fall. (X2)
I fall away.
I fall. (X2)
I fall unseen.
I fall (X2)
To lose it all. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Fall Unseen

Contributed by Essentially9 on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:05:59 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Fall Unseen

I tried to be unlike me.
I tried to be thee. (Repeat Chorus X2)

I didn't see
The unseen.
I got lost
In misery,
And forgot to use
Reason's means.

Love's useless
And so senseless.
It never ends,
And is never seen,
Because it's kept away
Unsought by thee.

Hate takes away
Every feeling,
And I lost thyself
To myself
Never regained again.

I fall. (X2)
I fall away.
I fall. (X2)
I fall unseen.
I fall (X2)
To lose it all.

Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2004-03-19 01:05:59]
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Re: Fall Unseen (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:10:38 AM AEST
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this seems unusually similar to the music i'm listening to right now... you wouldn't happen to be... no, couldn't be. could it... lol, good song! i like it a lot!! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Fall Unseen (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:16:27 AM AEST
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That was f***ing awesome. Sorry to be explicit, but that was genuinely incredible. Funny how depression always invokes the most creative part in us.

Re: Fall Unseen (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:24:28 PM AEST
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Your first post Jen...wow..how much you have grown little one...may the force be with you....

Clark=]

Re: Fall Unseen (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 04:45:12 PM AEST
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Lol, I got a kick outta this one :P I mean, what a leap you've taken in your writing! I'd say I've probably remained somewhat stationary in terms of my stuff. Lol, but anyways...do I detect a hint of repetition in this one? No, that can't be it...no way, not you :P I liked this though, I can't say I didnt to me honestly, it was a fun and almost nostalgic piece for me to read. Lol, I could easily see somebody singing this one and making big bucks off it :P

This wouldn't be why you hate repetition, is it?...

Re: Fall Unseen (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 05:25:50 PM AEST
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This is not bad. I like the simplistic veres you use. I can hear this played with guitar with a base

Re: Fall Unseen (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 08:23:13 AM AEST
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Bitterness, sadness, loss...such strong emotions here...I had to come back...to your begining as it were.
For someone that clamis to be lost, you seem to know yourself so much better than most people I know.

Re: Fall Unseen (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 5th November 2014 @ 10:12:40 AM AEST
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Hey, Little Miss!! You have been on my mind lately and I hope you are kicking major arse somewhere.

You? Fall unseen? Never, Jen. Simply amazing, as always.

~Scorp

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