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Array ( [sid] => 39276 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Torn in 2 for our 2 [time] => 2004-03-19 00:55:51 [hometext] => I wrote this today. It is the first recent poem I have submitted [bodytext] => My sweetheart is gone
Well beyond
100 miles
To make a living for our little smiles.

This is a hard thing to do
When you love someone so true
But when there are two
Counting on you
It’s something you got to do.

Our hearts
Tear apart
As we long for one another
Long for our best friend and lover.
But we have to suck it up and move on
To provide our kids beyond
What we ever got
So they can be something we are not.
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Torn in 2 for our 2

Contributed by Jade on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:55:51 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My sweetheart is gone
Well beyond
100 miles
To make a living for our little smiles.

This is a hard thing to do
When you love someone so true
But when there are two
Counting on you
It’s something you got to do.

Our hearts
Tear apart
As we long for one another
Long for our best friend and lover.
But we have to suck it up and move on
To provide our kids beyond
What we ever got
So they can be something we are not.

Copyright Â© Jade ... [ 2004-03-19 00:55:51]
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Re: Torn in 2 for our 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:00:25 AM AEST
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live to not regret it, hoepfully it's just a season... ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Torn in 2 for our 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:08:31 AM AEST
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I know it is hard on the two of you, but loving caring parents will unselfishly do whatever it takes to care for their children to give them a good life. I wish for inner strength and love for your both and happy healthy childhoods for the children. Sounds like they have probably have that already.

Rainbows,
Rita

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