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It's been a long time...
I've been waiting for you.
I never wanted to care,
No I found someone to be my teddy bear.
So i can squeeze you when i want,
And you can hold me all night long.
You're everything i want...
You're everything i need...
But you can't take advantage of me.
I wanna run away with you...
But i gotta know,
Do you feel the way I do?
Ever since that day in June,
Your first kiss left me speechless.
I wanna know if this is right,
So i'll never have to fight.
You're everything I want...
You're everything I need...
But you can't take advantage of me.
I wanna be your rose in a glass...
Treat me like a princess.
I wanna be your rose in a glass...
Don't break me to pieces. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Chilibear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Can you be my dream come true?

Contributed by Chilibear on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:02:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Can you be my dream come true?
It's been a long time...
I've been waiting for you.
I never wanted to care,
No I found someone to be my teddy bear.
So i can squeeze you when i want,
And you can hold me all night long.
You're everything i want...
You're everything i need...
But you can't take advantage of me.
I wanna run away with you...
But i gotta know,
Do you feel the way I do?
Ever since that day in June,
Your first kiss left me speechless.
I wanna know if this is right,
So i'll never have to fight.
You're everything I want...
You're everything I need...
But you can't take advantage of me.
I wanna be your rose in a glass...
Treat me like a princess.
I wanna be your rose in a glass...
Don't break me to pieces.

Copyright © Chilibear ... [ 2004-03-18 20:02:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Can you be my dream come true? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarafina on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:12:23 PM AEST
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Great. I'm always a fan of love. This would defanitly be something I'd use on a boyfriend or crush.
Sarafina

Re: Can you be my dream come true? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:44:21 PM AEST
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well done

Shari

Re: Can you be my dream come true? (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:13:27 PM AEST
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hehehe, you know what? When I first read this poem I almost doubt if this is written by my girlfriend! Because the poem sound SO much like her! She is a very girly girl just like you, love teddies, fragile like a rose, and want to be treat like a princess! Hehehe, I have to show this to her, I bet she will love your poem!^_^

Re: Can you be my dream come true? (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 02:08:50 PM AEST
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I love this poem so much. It reminds me of me Chili.
Girl, keep up the good work!!!. You friend, Pamela.

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