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Array ( [sid] => 39218 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The voices of my conscience [time] => 2004-03-18 18:16:12 [hometext] => this is what i ask myself every time i talk in front of people, or join something new, but take a look at why it hasn't stopped me! [bodytext] => what if you don't fit in
what if people don't see you
what if they don't notice
what if they laugh
what if they criticize
what if they call out names
what if they make you cry
what if you don't go back
what if you are unable to return
what if you can't escape
what if they just don't see
what if you aren't who they want you to be
what if you aren't good enough
what if you aren't all that tough
what if you can't take it
what if you collapse to the ground
what if no one is there to help you up
what if they just leave you there
what if no one even knows you are there
ill tell you what
ill be there beside you the whole time [comments] => 4 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The voices of my conscience

Contributed by SAT on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:16:12 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

what if you don't fit in
what if people don't see you
what if they don't notice
what if they laugh
what if they criticize
what if they call out names
what if they make you cry
what if you don't go back
what if you are unable to return
what if you can't escape
what if they just don't see
what if you aren't who they want you to be
what if you aren't good enough
what if you aren't all that tough
what if you can't take it
what if you collapse to the ground
what if no one is there to help you up
what if they just leave you there
what if no one even knows you are there
ill tell you what
ill be there beside you the whole time

Copyright © SAT ... [ 2004-03-18 18:16:12]
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Re: The voices of my conscience (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:19:41 PM AEST
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ooo, anthemic... i like this, a strong write! woo... lol, good write, good write! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: The voices of my conscience (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:43:23 PM AEST
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all of the above happens to me all the time....the only person there for me ever is myself, good write...i suck at writing

Re: The voices of my conscience (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:51:46 PM AEST
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I have the same fears, I guess alot of people do. I remember the first poem I submitted here I was like TERRIFIED and almost talked myself out of it. So yeah I could relate to this poem. Thought it was excellent to by the way... Kie

Re: The voices of my conscience (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:59:59 AM AEST
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YOU TELL EM' ! YOU'RE MORE THAN A PERSON,YOU'RE A STEPPING STONE IN THE SHAPE OF A HEART! A FRIEND FOREVER & ALTOGETHER A SPECIAL PERSON I'D LOVE TO BACK ME IF I NEEDED
SOMEONE!! I'LL BE THERE FOR YOU TOO,
JUST LIKE THE GOLD OF YOUR SOUL,NO
MATTER WHAT'S THE TOLL!!! AN INSPIRING POEM-ALL SO TRUE!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!!

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