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Because I'm afraid to tell him
He could be so powerfull, so strong
I often find myself in love with him or the one
He could become, but aren"t they the same?
Things aren"t the way they use to be
he"s fighting me
He doesn"t understand why he feels the way he does and he doesn"t know I have all the answers
He"ll never know because I"m afraid to tell him
How do I put it? "Your a vampire!"
That will just confuse him
What I"m afraid most of is never trying
Never giving him the chance to be who he"s suppose to be
It sounds like he can"t do it with out me
But thats because I don"t think he will
He wants to be different, but not that different
He doesn"t realize he already is
He doesn"t understand the things he expierences
The blood lust, or "need" for me
In other people"s eyes he"s a freak but to me he"s one of my kind just lost and so alone.
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He

Contributed by Sarafina on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:16:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He will live his life never knowing what he is
Because I'm afraid to tell him
He could be so powerfull, so strong
I often find myself in love with him or the one
He could become, but aren"t they the same?
Things aren"t the way they use to be
he"s fighting me
He doesn"t understand why he feels the way he does and he doesn"t know I have all the answers
He"ll never know because I"m afraid to tell him
How do I put it? "Your a vampire!"
That will just confuse him
What I"m afraid most of is never trying
Never giving him the chance to be who he"s suppose to be
It sounds like he can"t do it with out me
But thats because I don"t think he will
He wants to be different, but not that different
He doesn"t realize he already is
He doesn"t understand the things he expierences
The blood lust, or "need" for me
In other people"s eyes he"s a freak but to me he"s one of my kind just lost and so alone.

Copyright © Sarafina ... [ 2004-03-18 18:16:05]
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Re: He (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:21:39 PM AEST
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aww... gotta love the freaks and geeks! considering yur "new at this" i think you did an exceptional job! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: He (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:24:42 PM AEST
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i agree whole heartedly with remy on this looking forward to more

michelle :)
@~~>~~

Re: He (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:24:43 PM AEST
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Nice 1st poem, its nice, kinda bout love isn't it?
don't worry my 1st poem wasn't to great also, keep trying, i like your poetry, its like your speaking for your self, just like yourself, i don't think i found out how to do that yet,
keep up the good work,

TwEeK

Re: He (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:49:38 PM AEST
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im an idiot.......im reading about vampires, but is it just me? im getting a different kind of feel. sounds more like youre talking about yourself....'lost and so alone'. i like it, its interesting. many things can be taken from it

Re: He (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarafina on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 07:33:05 PM AEST
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Thanx for your comment guys. You can look foward to more. And maybe your right, maybe I am talking about myself. This poem will become a journal entry by a character in my book. Which will be on my soon to be website. As soon as I figure out how to make one. Any idea?

Sarafina

Re: He (User Rating: 1 )
by Juggalette_chick666pk on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:07:03 PM AEST
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I've been writing poems for years and when i first started out I needed to see if people liked them, people did and i like yours. Hope to see more great poems.
-Victoria-

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