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Array ( [sid] => 39174 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Letter to god [time] => 2004-03-18 13:09:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => They pick on me...
Taunt me, tease me
... hurt me
...I cry...
I break down, just ..fall to the floor
Head clasped in the corner..
.. i Scream
Raping me..
I can feel myself dying
Can feel it just pulling away
..Sliding down...
Im left here with nothing
..Nothing to live for

Its not easy to hide.. all these feelings inside
..Ugly
Watching this knife,
.. Rip out my heart
Watching them devour it..
Blood dripping down their chin
...Bastards..
Im left here with nothing..
...Nothing to live for

Im cradled here lock in my head..
..Silence..
Its killing me...
Im left here with nothing..
...Nothing to live for....
JUST LISTEN TO ME
I HATE THEM
I WANT THEM TO DIE

GOD JUST KILL ME!!!!!!

pl..ease ..god..please.... just kill me..... [comments] => 7 [counter] => 294 [topic] => 36 [informant] => forever_lonely [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Letter to god

Contributed by forever_lonely on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:09:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

They pick on me...
Taunt me, tease me
... hurt me
...I cry...
I break down, just ..fall to the floor
Head clasped in the corner..
.. i Scream
Raping me..
I can feel myself dying
Can feel it just pulling away
..Sliding down...
Im left here with nothing
..Nothing to live for

Its not easy to hide.. all these feelings inside
..Ugly
Watching this knife,
.. Rip out my heart
Watching them devour it..
Blood dripping down their chin
...Bastards..
Im left here with nothing..
...Nothing to live for

Im cradled here lock in my head..
..Silence..
Its killing me...
Im left here with nothing..
...Nothing to live for....
JUST LISTEN TO ME
I HATE THEM
I WANT THEM TO DIE

GOD JUST KILL ME!!!!!!

pl..ease ..god..please.... just kill me.....

Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2004-03-18 13:09:32]
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Re: Letter to god (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:12:05 PM AEST
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such despaire expressed here
sending you big hugs
((((((((((foreverlonely)))))))))

michelle

Re: Letter to god (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:15:19 PM AEST
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Oh what a sad bitter poem! And I tought I'd read some light poem. This poem screamed in my head how much hate and bitterness this person hold towards life. Its truely amazing how you wrote it. It squeezed my heart. Amazing poem as usual keep it up ;)
Anne :d

Re: Letter to god (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:15:22 PM AEST
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Wow! What power! Your torment jumps from the page and into the readers soul.

I hope it's simply poetic ravings and not a reality.

Very well done my friend
Larry

Re: Letter to god (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_Mistress on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:22:38 PM AEST
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aww, sugar...things'll get better~ in the meantime, learn some self defence or something so you can kick their butts.

I really like your poem because I went through something similar when I was younger. Hearing all of the pain and anger and despair behind your words, there is no doubt in my mind that you've actually experienced this.

Re: Letter to god (User Rating: 1 )
by discantbelife on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 03:47:23 PM AEST
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wonderful i can just remeber feeling like this one time or another in my life... ugh amazing if i say so my self

Re: Letter to god (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:42:51 PM AEST
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very sadly vivid luke, im always here for you, huggies n' love nessa

Re: Letter to god (User Rating: 1 )
by fallen_eyes on Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:40:37 PM AEST
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Luke this poem has such immense feelings its incrediable. i really hope you dont feel like this and if so please please talk to me you know i am always here for you. The poem really jumps off the page and wraps itself around the reader, the room goes cold and their spine will shake, you really do express the emotion so well that the poem does come to life for the split second it is being read. Its an amzing write
luv always Pickle xxx

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