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Array ( [sid] => 3911 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => heartbreak [time] => 2002-09-16 17:37:28 [hometext] => this is my friends let her know what u think . [bodytext] => I love you.
Others may try to replace you,
But none do what you did to me.
You complete me,
You are my everything.

I am restlessly thinking,
Of all the things we have been through
We passed through many obstacles,
And in the end they hindered the love...
The love that once beamed from you.
I learned my lesson and now I know,
That sometimes you just have to let things go.

It is not always easy,
To keep the ones you love from drifting.
And it’s also very hard,
To forgive those who have extinguished the fire,
The fire that once lived in your eyes.

I have tried to forget you,
And all that brought was pain.
Now all I want to tell you is I miss you,
And completely in love with you.
You just don’t understand your love,
And now all we have is memories.

You constantly swarm my mind.
How are you doing...
What are you doing...
Are you thinking of me...
Do you feel what I feel?
Why can't we make it real?
If we tried, it just might work.

I wish you would change your way
So we could be together again.
Please don't tell me no,
Give it just one more try...
I love you.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 22 [informant] => idiotbox [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
heartbreak

Contributed by idiotbox on Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 05:37:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I love you.
Others may try to replace you,
But none do what you did to me.
You complete me,
You are my everything.

I am restlessly thinking,
Of all the things we have been through
We passed through many obstacles,
And in the end they hindered the love...
The love that once beamed from you.
I learned my lesson and now I know,
That sometimes you just have to let things go.

It is not always easy,
To keep the ones you love from drifting.
And it’s also very hard,
To forgive those who have extinguished the fire,
The fire that once lived in your eyes.

I have tried to forget you,
And all that brought was pain.
Now all I want to tell you is I miss you,
And completely in love with you.
You just don’t understand your love,
And now all we have is memories.

You constantly swarm my mind.
How are you doing...
What are you doing...
Are you thinking of me...
Do you feel what I feel?
Why can't we make it real?
If we tried, it just might work.

I wish you would change your way
So we could be together again.
Please don't tell me no,
Give it just one more try...
I love you.




Copyright © idiotbox ... [ 2002-09-16 17:37:28]
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Re: heartbreak (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 08:33:38 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem,well written.




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