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So Long
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:35:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I once was here,
But now I'm gone,
You had told me you loved me,
then said "so long".
Now I have written this,
so into death I go headstrong.
Never did I want to here those words,
my life came crashing down.
Decided to leave this world,
my dead body still to be found.
I loved you more thanyou'll ever know,
and forever I allways will.
Through my darkness of death,
more love than one's herat would fill.
And now you found me on the ground,
my crying soul put to rest.
I know that you'll join me soon,
useing the blood drenched dagger apon my chest.
We were once here,
But now were gone.
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-03-17 11:35:22]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: So Long
(User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 09:39:42 PM AEST
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| Great poem, dunno if this was inspired by anything but remember-- no guy is worth dying over. There will be plenty of others. Good job, keep it up! |
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