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Nuclear Winter
Contributed by
doug
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 09:49:32 AM in AEST
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i lay your bones out on the bed
sometimes pretend that your not dead
i lay your bones out on the bed
i pretend that your not dead
i talk to you but you wont talk back
i try to love you but your so cold
you stare at me with your dead eyes
i wish i could say goodbye
i am alone
i am so cold the world is dead
there is no meat left on your head
i eat your flesh down to the bone
i will die too when you are gone
the nuclear winter is here
forever here
i sit in my house cause theres nowhere to go
i eat the mice that run to and fro
i eat cockroches, whatever i can
what happened, i can't understand
everything is gone
so alone
theres nobody alive but me
outside my window theres nothing but nuclear snow
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2004-03-17 09:49:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Nuclear Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by AliB on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:40:40 AM AEST (User
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Yuk!!! "I eat your flesh down to the bone"
Very good, scary to think what would happen if we did have a Nuclear war.
Ali xx |
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Re: Nuclear Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:43:32 PM AEST (User
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Very vivid and umm gross lol I love this it was awesome!! Great work.
Arden
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Re: Nuclear Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:44:25 PM AEST (User
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Chilling, scary and food for thought. Horrible thought, I hope I am not around nor do I want to be eaten! Kie |
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Re: Nuclear Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:06:19 PM AEST (User
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eeek that was kinda scarey.
I am sure thats everyones nightmares.
good write though.But alittle disturbing.
but still good :) |
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Re: Nuclear Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:20:00 AM AEST (User
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"i eat the mice that run to and fro
i eat cockroches, whatever i can
what happened, i can't understand"....
Awww..it is a great struggle for existance..
.. quite chilling.. venkat
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Re: Nuclear Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:07:58 AM AEST (User
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excellent, vivid, filled with the loneliness that would surely be, an awesome poem, doug:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Nuclear Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by NirvanaLotus on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:13:01 PM AEST (User
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m i love the morbid beuty of it, it makes me shudder. you amaze me. keep it up |
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Re: Nuclear Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by jono on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 07:31:23 AM AEST (User
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That must be one huge experireance |
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