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Prints
Contributed by
Kola
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 09:47:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Water resistant and fully loaded,
I lay in the mist of forming souls.
I touch the prints of an innocent man,
Who's music smears across my chest,
causing my lungs to collapse.
Grab my breath as I breathe,
uplift me to your level,
so we can dance this one together.
Copyright ©
Kola
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2004-03-17 09:47:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Prints
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:46:31 PM AEST (User
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I loved the feel and flow of this poem. But after reading it twice I still found it mysterious. Kie |
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Re: Prints
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:08:53 PM AEST (User
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this make me claustiphobic . thanks for transmitting that feeling. good one! |
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Re: Prints
(User Rating: 1 ) by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:19:21 AM AEST (User
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i had to read it through a couple of times before i could trully form an image of what you were trying to prptray, but other than that good work./ |
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