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Array ( [sid] => 38957 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide Note [time] => 2004-03-16 22:40:26 [hometext] => Thank you for reading my poems. Sorry a lot of them got boring. [bodytext] => Why bother to live?
We are born to die.
Why do people
crave life so?
Living only
brings pain.
I shed a single
tear as
I leave this torturous
state called living.
The tear falls and
mixes with the blood
from my wrists.
With each drop of blood
that crashes to the ground,
I remember a
painful memory,
with emotions all too
familiar.
The world starts
spinning and grows
darker and darker.
I begin to feel restful,
free of the pain.
Farewell, sweet sorrow,
good-bye, silent suffering.
Hello eternity of
freedom. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 36 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Suicide Note

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 10:40:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Why bother to live?
We are born to die.
Why do people
crave life so?
Living only
brings pain.
I shed a single
tear as
I leave this torturous
state called living.
The tear falls and
mixes with the blood
from my wrists.
With each drop of blood
that crashes to the ground,
I remember a
painful memory,
with emotions all too
familiar.
The world starts
spinning and grows
darker and darker.
I begin to feel restful,
free of the pain.
Farewell, sweet sorrow,
good-bye, silent suffering.
Hello eternity of
freedom.

Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-03-16 22:40:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:00:33 AM AEST
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death isn't exactly boring, but it seems to only have one emotion - dark. good write, poetic and lovely. ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:24:01 PM AEST
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awesome write. i really enjoy the imagery you used. keep it up!

addie

Re: Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:20:48 PM AEST
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Hey, like i said don't kill yourself, just don't,
you can find freedom else where, don't,okay just don't............

Re: Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by jLo on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:23:43 PM AEST
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good write ..i like the dark poetry u write cause it descibes how i feel sometimes,but hey don't ever try or kill ur self..k........when i feel this way i jus listen to ozzy osborne..i like ur dark side of poetry.......keep it up

jLo

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