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Array ( [sid] => 38902 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dark side [time] => 2004-03-16 16:14:22 [hometext] => I need to learn to walk away..... [bodytext] => _________________________

swallowed so much pain lately
breathing becomes an agony
that tears cannot soothe
and I lift my eyes to you
wondering if you are the one
knowing the answer
before the words come
in black letters
sharper than a blade
they cut my pride
you know I tried
to please
tried to be
something I'm not
lost soul inside
stumbles over you
the dark side of me

gmm2004 [comments] => 7 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 21 [informant] => merry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

dark side

Contributed by merry on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 04:14:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

_________________________

swallowed so much pain lately
breathing becomes an agony
that tears cannot soothe
and I lift my eyes to you
wondering if you are the one
knowing the answer
before the words come
in black letters
sharper than a blade
they cut my pride
you know I tried
to please
tried to be
something I'm not
lost soul inside
stumbles over you
the dark side of me

gmm2004

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Re: dark side (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 04:41:27 PM AEST
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Wow great write!

Re: dark side (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 04:42:05 PM AEST
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As always, good stuff.
As always, know the feeling.
Stitch

Re: dark side (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 05:01:45 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes. You expressed the pain and hurt you are feeling so well in this poem. If I can do anything to help you, please let me know. Kie

Re: dark side (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 05:12:41 PM AEST
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I understand this! Great emotional expression.
michelle

Re: dark side (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 05:34:38 PM AEST
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I know the torment you are going through, and if I didnt this write would have made it cystal clear. Time for the daisy to bloom.

very well done.
Roses
Larry

Re: dark side (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 06:39:32 PM AEST
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Oh :((((( I feel for you Gaille ... this write I relate to so well ... hugs *daisies* Jan

Re: dark side (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 11:34:14 PM AEST
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this is beautiful gaille but so sad..... big warm hugs, lotsa love, nessa
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