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is the love that is unrequited.
Can anyone leave a heart on a sleeve
when no way can they be united.
If your love is the love of intense desire,
and you feel on fire,
And your thoughts perspire
from the heat of a pyre,
Then you understand there is no way your life can be righted.

It is sad, it is sad, it's a feeling so bad
that the end almost seems like an answer,
There's no hope, there's no hope, there is no way to cope,
'cause the feeling must be like a cancer.
And the cure, you be sure
Is a cure, like a lure,
And it holds no allure
And your thoughts are so dour
Then you understand the only way to sleep is to lance her. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 13 [informant] => norm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Hopelessness

Contributed by norm on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 11:32:35 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Can anyone doubt that the harshest love
is the love that is unrequited.
Can anyone leave a heart on a sleeve
when no way can they be united.
If your love is the love of intense desire,
and you feel on fire,
And your thoughts perspire
from the heat of a pyre,
Then you understand there is no way your life can be righted.

It is sad, it is sad, it's a feeling so bad
that the end almost seems like an answer,
There's no hope, there's no hope, there is no way to cope,
'cause the feeling must be like a cancer.
And the cure, you be sure
Is a cure, like a lure,
And it holds no allure
And your thoughts are so dour
Then you understand the only way to sleep is to lance her.

Copyright © norm ... [ 2004-03-16 11:32:35]
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Re: Hopelessness (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 11:47:20 AM AEST
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You have captured the nuances of the feeling in your own unique way. Today I have a sad smile for you.
Stitch

Re: Hopelessness (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 11:52:11 AM AEST
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Good poem but a little too sad and pessimistic for my taste. Keep on writing Norm I am sure you have some delightful little poem tucked away somewhere. all the best from bernard.

Re: Hopelessness (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:36:11 PM AEST
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You'd better not Norm......or you're going to end up in jail!
I just think you did a real find job on this one.
First I cried and then I laughed.....sort of that's the genius in your poem great one!
consue

Re: Hopelessness (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 04:22:18 PM AEST
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This just goes to show you can write in so many different ways.. You are a great poet. Kie

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