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Array ( [sid] => 38858 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blood Tears and Raindrops [time] => 2004-03-16 09:32:20 [hometext] => comment if you wish. ...i like to hear what other people think of my poems THANKS! [bodytext] => she stands alone
on the hilltop
screaming.
to let her frustrations free.
she holds a dagger
in her hands.
crying to the skies
she asks God why.
why she suffered through
this unbareable pain
which imprisoned her
in darkness.
the clouds rolled in,
and lightening struck,
and lit up the sky
with a great white light.
as the heavy rain
drowned out her pleas
she was alone.
just her and her storm.
the wind ripped through her hair
and blew her tears away.
how she loved the rain.
no one sees you crying in the rain.
in complete sorrow
she slits her wrists
and watches her blood drain,
onto the muddy dust
beneath her feet.
in all it's glory
it's what she loves.
shades of claret
racing down her arms
seeping from fingertips
to ground.
she turns and
screams out one last time.
cursing this world.
cursing her life.
she raises her hands
with the dagger in tight grip
she releases a gasp,
a sigh of relief
as the silvery death
penetrates her heart.
her soul.
she has commited her wish
and died
her beautiful death.
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Blood Tears and Raindrops

Contributed by crying-crimson-tears on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 09:32:20 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

she stands alone
on the hilltop
screaming.
to let her frustrations free.
she holds a dagger
in her hands.
crying to the skies
she asks God why.
why she suffered through
this unbareable pain
which imprisoned her
in darkness.
the clouds rolled in,
and lightening struck,
and lit up the sky
with a great white light.
as the heavy rain
drowned out her pleas
she was alone.
just her and her storm.
the wind ripped through her hair
and blew her tears away.
how she loved the rain.
no one sees you crying in the rain.
in complete sorrow
she slits her wrists
and watches her blood drain,
onto the muddy dust
beneath her feet.
in all it's glory
it's what she loves.
shades of claret
racing down her arms
seeping from fingertips
to ground.
she turns and
screams out one last time.
cursing this world.
cursing her life.
she raises her hands
with the dagger in tight grip
she releases a gasp,
a sigh of relief
as the silvery death
penetrates her heart.
her soul.
she has commited her wish
and died
her beautiful death.

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Re: Blood Tears and Raindrops (User Rating: 1 )
by MacGyver_Dk on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 09:50:19 AM AEST
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Hi, what a great poem!!!! I felt the pain and the freedon in your poem. Wow, you have such a talent to describe in detail with words which paint a vivid picture in your work. Keep up the good work!! Im going to read more of your work!
Sincerley
Mac

Re: Blood Tears and Raindrops (User Rating: 1 )
by MacGyver_Dk on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 09:52:11 AM AEST
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Sorry I didnt rate your poem, its get a five!!!

Mac

Re: Blood Tears and Raindrops (User Rating: 1 )
by bear8807 on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 10:02:37 AM AEST
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nicely done keep up the good work you have a real talent of describing the pain and happiness of dying. very nicely done.
thank you so much for sharing this work of art with us
jole

Re: Blood Tears and Raindrops (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:07:16 PM AEST
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so dark and so friggin good! wow i loved this. you have a very nice way of describing death and such. awesomely done. a impressive talent you have.
Arden

Re: Blood Tears and Raindrops (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:59:23 PM AEST
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very sad! that's all i can say. this amde me want to cry...

Re: Blood Tears and Raindrops (User Rating: 1 )
by EVERxSOxSWEET on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:59:13 PM AEST
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Thats Excellent. Its so deep. I loved it, your an amazing writter and you grip detail so well.

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