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The Storm

Contributed by AmandaBeth on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:07:52 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



memories are like a knife to my heart
smiles remembered of loves that I lost
Childhood dreams lie shattered on the floor
broken promises, love is no more
Lives that I hurt, tears that they cried
am I still the monster deep inside?
pain is my friend, i no longer feel
silence I crave, but the voices I hear
calling my name, pulling me under
trying to breathe I can hear the thunder
shaking and wet I stand to my feet
darkness consumes me, I can not leave
too many mistakes made, I am lost to the sea
drowning and falling... the storm has me.....




Copyright © AmandaBeth ... [ 2004-03-15 20:07:52]
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Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Tedi on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:13:08 PM AEST
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i really felt something while reading ur poem and thats what matters most 2 me.
Good Job!


Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:15:41 PM AEST
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So much pain and misery in this poem it just cried out to me. Wow this one got to me...Kie


Re: The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:08:21 PM AEST
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This is a short write, but very strong in its words and imagery, well done.




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