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Array ( [sid] => 388 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Creative Walls [time] => 2002-07-14 12:31:59 [hometext] => Ever felt trapped in your own mind when you tried to write? I have and this is how it felt. [bodytext] =>

Trapped
Confused
Bottled up in my very own mind
the words are there
caught up
tied together
with ropes of pain
to let them go
such sweet release I'd gain
suffocating feelings
of constant reaching
flutters of thoughts
swiftly swept away
by mundane troubles
that stifle the music
of my soul
my dreams shut up behind
doors of the real world
the fire of my mind
turning to embers
barely burning
one small spark
struggling to survive
then
suddenly
the music starts
softly tinkling
barely there
emotions first
then dreams take form
again I can feel
the sweet pain
of sharing my soul
one word
one thought
then the pen
begins to flow
pouring out the
plethora of emotions
and dreams that harbor
in the core of my being
slowly forming into
the offspring of my heart
finally free again
to dream
to feel
to hear
my soul
sing
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Creative Walls

Contributed by SoulThinKing on Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 12:31:59 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Trapped
Confused
Bottled up in my very own mind
the words are there
caught up
tied together
with ropes of pain
to let them go
such sweet release I'd gain
suffocating feelings
of constant reaching
flutters of thoughts
swiftly swept away
by mundane troubles
that stifle the music
of my soul
my dreams shut up behind
doors of the real world
the fire of my mind
turning to embers
barely burning
one small spark
struggling to survive
then
suddenly
the music starts
softly tinkling
barely there
emotions first
then dreams take form
again I can feel
the sweet pain
of sharing my soul
one word
one thought
then the pen
begins to flow
pouring out the
plethora of emotions
and dreams that harbor
in the core of my being
slowly forming into
the offspring of my heart
finally free again
to dream
to feel
to hear
my soul
sing

Copyright © SoulThinKing ... [ 2002-07-14 12:31:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Creative Walls (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:49:16 AM AEST
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very nice, well written

jackee_line

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