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Array ( [sid] => 38792 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Whats missing [time] => 2004-03-15 18:55:36 [hometext] => *Looks far away and smiles* [bodytext] => I go to feel you there
like a mirror that shimmers
and shows you by my side.
You always came and went
just as would a beach tide.
Staring at you always
reminded me of looking at
the stars and moon, beautiful.
The soft touch of skin
and the gentleness of your lips to mine.
The purity in your eyes when
your lips whisper gently
'I love you'
and the way it brought a smile
and was a gentle breeze on my face.
How you always smiled when
I walked in from the rain
and it seemed to brighten
the world around you.
The way you only looked at me
and bound me in joy.
The little presents and
the way you snuck kisses.
The roses handed with a smile...
The letters written with love...
These are the things missed.
These are the things
that screamed she loved me.
These are the things I had.
That I ruined...
That I threw away...
Because I was too
blind to see
all the love
she had for me.
So now...
These are the things I miss...

Raven's Sin [comments] => 5 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Whats missing

Contributed by Cobalt on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 06:55:36 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I go to feel you there
like a mirror that shimmers
and shows you by my side.
You always came and went
just as would a beach tide.
Staring at you always
reminded me of looking at
the stars and moon, beautiful.
The soft touch of skin
and the gentleness of your lips to mine.
The purity in your eyes when
your lips whisper gently
'I love you'
and the way it brought a smile
and was a gentle breeze on my face.
How you always smiled when
I walked in from the rain
and it seemed to brighten
the world around you.
The way you only looked at me
and bound me in joy.
The little presents and
the way you snuck kisses.
The roses handed with a smile...
The letters written with love...
These are the things missed.
These are the things
that screamed she loved me.
These are the things I had.
That I ruined...
That I threw away...
Because I was too
blind to see
all the love
she had for me.
So now...
These are the things I miss...

Raven's Sin




Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-03-15 18:55:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Whats missing (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 07:14:59 PM AEST
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This was so tender it touched my heart and I believe it would touch hers as well if she read it.

One of your best. Kie


Re: Whats missing (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:44:55 AM AEST
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Very Touching......
Loved it...AweSome Write.......
..........Love.......AnGeL.......


Re: Whats missing (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 04:30:17 AM AEST
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Beautifully written ... swimming with romance ... loved it ... Jan


Re: Whats missing (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 12:30:22 PM AEST
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the softer side of you is beautiful
as is this poem

michelle


Re: Whats missing (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 11:00:18 PM AEST
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this is beautiful jeff, hugs n' love nessa




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