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Array ( [sid] => 38754 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Scripted [time] => 2004-03-15 15:56:22 [hometext] => my life is run off of a script. nothing i do can prevent all that has been written in. these are the words from which the director of my life told me to write. . . . . [bodytext] => My existence is that of a Hollywood actor. .
it is scripted.
The joys, tragic events - it is part of this play my life is evolving from.
Like a finely crafted sculpture, my mind, body and soul are all creations
from the addicts of thee inhuman,
framed by the freakish of the indifferent.
Relapse to the past and reinvent those moments,
this is one fine prelude to this masterpiece.
Life is a joke - a momentary joy and then I am at once set ablaze.
Opposed by the next box office "thriller." [comments] => 4 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 43 [informant] => apollo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Scripted

Contributed by apollo on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 03:56:22 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

My existence is that of a Hollywood actor. .
it is scripted.
The joys, tragic events - it is part of this play my life is evolving from.
Like a finely crafted sculpture, my mind, body and soul are all creations
from the addicts of thee inhuman,
framed by the freakish of the indifferent.
Relapse to the past and reinvent those moments,
this is one fine prelude to this masterpiece.
Life is a joke - a momentary joy and then I am at once set ablaze.
Opposed by the next box office "thriller."

Copyright © apollo ... [ 2004-03-15 15:56:22]
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Re: Scripted (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 04:26:23 PM AEST
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wow, i like it! especially lines 6 and 7. keep it up, and don't ever change, ur perfect the way you are!

alicia marie
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Re: Scripted (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 04:49:46 PM AEST
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A coincidence perhaps or is it scripted? I was watching an awards show honoring local artists in my country Malaysia when the artist receiving the most popular artist award said something that seems to complement your work here. Paraphrased this is what he said...

' life is a play, and a play is life, everything in life is scripted, I live in a play under the one director...God the one and only'.

Quite a conincidence I say.....a somewhat similar lines of thoughts...but in differing angles...yours is somewhat darker and his a little brighter. Regardles...quite a vivid painting of words is your work here in my opinion.

Re: Scripted (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:51:23 AM AEST
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thanks for your kind words alicia marie and baronhawk. your words really make my writing a more joyful moment no mattter what i may be composing. that is quite peculiar baronhawk that of what you spoke of regarding the speech an actor gave. i guess i just felt at the time that everything that has gone on has seemed ever so scripted like i am an animated motion picture like that of "toy story" or "finding nemo." real or am i ?

Re: Scripted (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 06:39:07 AM AEST
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How desolute you must feel! How alone! I am so sorry...God loves you, as do I.

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