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Array ( [sid] => 38743 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Abe's Oddysee [time] => 2004-03-15 14:33:36 [hometext] => I've already put this one on but it was on my mums account and i wanted it on mine [bodytext] => Abe's Oddysee

Off he goes on an epic quest,
Saving his peers at his best,
Chanting those sligs off his chest,
One slig..... two slig..... and the rest.

Run like hell they're on your trail,
Jump that ledge try not to bail,
Follow that paramite trail,
If you trip you'll fall like hail.

If you get through Rupture farms,
You'll be led into the dark,
Only the fireflies lead the path,
After this you'll need a bath.

As you jump the leap of faith,
The world slows down you take a break,
You're almost out of the wild without a trace,
And then you realise the jump you jumped, you make.

The vicious scrabs, the gullible paramites,
And then there's Elm, the leg cock in flight,
He can take you to incredible heights,
You never know, he may even save your life.

Beautiful scenes, wicked views,
Yes my mate there's quite a few,
The enormous heights, you may want to spew,
But that is what he has to do.

Dodging bats, boulders, bombs,
He only wants to get along,
But they won't be alive for long,
Coz he will make them bloody gone.

Now you'll wonder where all this fame,
Has come from in this terrific game,
Do you really want to know his name?
Well my friend, his name is...........Abe!
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Abe's Oddysee

Contributed by Dan666 on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 02:33:36 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Abe's Oddysee

Off he goes on an epic quest,
Saving his peers at his best,
Chanting those sligs off his chest,
One slig..... two slig..... and the rest.

Run like hell they're on your trail,
Jump that ledge try not to bail,
Follow that paramite trail,
If you trip you'll fall like hail.

If you get through Rupture farms,
You'll be led into the dark,
Only the fireflies lead the path,
After this you'll need a bath.

As you jump the leap of faith,
The world slows down you take a break,
You're almost out of the wild without a trace,
And then you realise the jump you jumped, you make.

The vicious scrabs, the gullible paramites,
And then there's Elm, the leg cock in flight,
He can take you to incredible heights,
You never know, he may even save your life.

Beautiful scenes, wicked views,
Yes my mate there's quite a few,
The enormous heights, you may want to spew,
But that is what he has to do.

Dodging bats, boulders, bombs,
He only wants to get along,
But they won't be alive for long,
Coz he will make them bloody gone.

Now you'll wonder where all this fame,
Has come from in this terrific game,
Do you really want to know his name?
Well my friend, his name is...........Abe!

Copyright © Dan666 ... [ 2004-03-15 14:33:36]
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Re: Abe's Oddysee (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 03:30:36 PM AEST
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Hi Daniel
(Pasted this from your Mums account)

Well Im speechless!! I love this game, and you have really bought it to life. Your descriptions are excellent, as is your rhyming. You can just imagine you are Abe!!
Keep writing, and I agree you should open your own account. Let me know when you do.

Love Dawny x

Re: Abe's Oddysee (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:51:46 PM AEST
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ooooh i used to play that game! lol, i love abe:) now i only play sims:P ...your talent really shines in this, great style and laid out well:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Abe's Oddysee (User Rating: 1 )
by Dan666 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:26:25 AM AEST
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Re: Abe's Oddysee (User Rating: 1)
by wildeJohnny on Wednesday, March 10 2004 @ 18:33:20 CST
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Talented is an understatement, your son has a gift for poetry, no late nights out with the girls! straight to the writing desk for that boy!

wildejohnny.

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Re: Abe's Oddysee (User Rating: 1 )
by Dan666 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:28:00 AM AEST
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Re: Abe's Oddysee (User Rating: 1)
by ladyfawn (PrissyMulligan@hotmail.com) on Wednesday, March 10 2004 @ 18:40:37 CST
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thanx for posting ali, this is how my son started too, to your son:

keep writing hon, you show much talent, this is delightful, i very much look forward to reading more from you, please open your own account and let me know when you do:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->-

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Re: Abe's Oddysee (User Rating: 1 )
by Dan666 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:29:15 AM AEST
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Re: Abe's Oddysee (User Rating: 1)
by RITA on Wednesday, March 10 2004 @ 20:50:59 CST
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I cannot believe you are only 14. Talent is a definite understatement here. Don't give up for you will only get better and better. It is true, practice makes perfect and you don't have far to go.

Rita

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Re: Abe's Oddysee (User Rating: 1 )
by Dan666 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:30:49 AM AEST
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Re: Abe's Oddysee (User Rating: 1)
by venkat on Friday, March 12 2004 @ 07:31:48 CST
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wow..you have written a nice poem...Good luck..continue dear boy..
venkat

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