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Array ( [sid] => 38584 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HATER [time] => 2004-03-14 12:55:01 [hometext] => This is meant for all to laugh at. demon of blood doesn't like my poetry. should I cry.... Ha you make me laugh I could care less about your criticism [bodytext] => I'm not a (edited) and I am not gay
Is this the only word you can say

You are ripped by my talent
Mr. demon of blood
I'm like the rabbit
And your Elmer Fudd

I take it Lucys your band
I could be wrong
With a mic in my hand
I'll thrash all your songs

Your poems are weak
I see why you hate
Its my time to speak
And you cant relate

You know the word (edited)
Thats good for you
But I wouldn't brag
If thats all I knew

I'm done with this battle
You can't handle me
Now run and go tattle
To your mommy

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 384 [topic] => 6 [informant] => SuicidalSon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

HATER

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:55:01 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I'm not a (edited) and I am not gay
Is this the only word you can say

You are ripped by my talent
Mr. demon of blood
I'm like the rabbit
And your Elmer Fudd

I take it Lucys your band
I could be wrong
With a mic in my hand
I'll thrash all your songs

Your poems are weak
I see why you hate
Its my time to speak
And you cant relate

You know the word (edited)
Thats good for you
But I wouldn't brag
If thats all I knew

I'm done with this battle
You can't handle me
Now run and go tattle
To your mommy

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2004-03-14 12:55:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: HATER (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:44:59 PM AEST
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I understand your anger towards this "hater", but I'd just like to mention that retaliating with this sort of "revenge" attitude, this attitude that you have to strike back and hurt him with negative words... it's not always the right thing to do. I'm not telling you what to do or that you were wrong because I like this poem, and I can see where you come from. I'm just giving you another viewpoint on the situation, my perspective.

liquidsunshine

Re: HATER (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:46:08 PM AEST
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oooh lots of veniom in this! but hey i liked it! some how i think you might care what he thinks judging the way you wrote a kickass poem about it! but anyhoo suppose id care if some stranger who doesent even know me called me a fag not that i call it a insult well he's pretty lame and pathetic but you just gotta pity him.

Re: HATER (User Rating: 1 )
by Demon_of_Blood on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 11:01:35 PM AEST
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hey. It was my brother. I apologize for his nonsense. He likes to screw around and I kicked his for it. Don't worry I changed my password so it won't happen again. Sorry about his bull***** guys.

Re: HATER (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 08:20:26 PM AEST
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I like this. Nice beat to it.... like... well it could be rapped... you know? I like the flow.... did you write this one off the top of your head? It came out nicely...

*J*

Re: HATER (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:57:46 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this a lot..your anger is not baseless. an exciting read..venkat

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