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Array ( [sid] => 38554 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken [time] => 2004-03-14 02:40:23 [hometext] => We all get hurt sometimes........ [bodytext] => A broken life,
full of broken dreams,
A newly broken heart,
ripped at the seams.

So many broken nights,
so cold and alone,
I'd die for a chance
to just talk on the phone.

I need some type of love,
something to come help me,
mold the broken pieces
into something I want to be.

A fragment of my heart,
left lying on the floor,
reminds me that I'm broken
and can be nothing more.
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Broken

Contributed by BrokenHeartedLass on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:40:23 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A broken life,
full of broken dreams,
A newly broken heart,
ripped at the seams.

So many broken nights,
so cold and alone,
I'd die for a chance
to just talk on the phone.

I need some type of love,
something to come help me,
mold the broken pieces
into something I want to be.

A fragment of my heart,
left lying on the floor,
reminds me that I'm broken
and can be nothing more.

Copyright © BrokenHeartedLass ... [ 2004-03-14 02:40:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:05:08 AM AEST
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Man i have felt like this before....such a good write!

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Dina on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 04:41:48 AM AEST
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I know how you feel, it is really true.

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinlimbo on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 11:24:11 AM AEST
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I'm here to say you can be something more. We write very similar.. it's uncanny. I love your work, I only hope I am privaledged to read and comment on more.

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:19:25 PM AEST
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very good poem! i hope writing helps you overcome your feelings a little!

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:35:21 PM AEST
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Broken and alone you are surely not, your words have touched this empty spot. You write so very well. Thank you.

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