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Array ( [sid] => 38551 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part One (The Intro) [time] => 2004-03-14 02:24:46 [hometext] => This is kind of new to me: this is story poetry that is going to be in parts. I've set it at four parts to tell the whole story. [bodytext] => I sit here looking out the window.
What I'm looking for,
It's not here.
What is it I'm looking for anyway?
I don't know.
It's a bright day,
A blue, cloudless sky.
I see the people,
But, yet, I see through them.
It is as if they are nothing
But a figment of my imagination,
A hologram, if you will.
I look out across the field,
I see memories
Through the transparecies
Of the people in between,
Memories of past love,
Of when I played on it,
Both in football
And as a member of the band.
My sister walks by on her lunch.
Now, in a sense,
I'm looking for someone,
The girl I love but who hates me.
Now the people are crowding my view,
I wish they'd move.
I haven't seen her yet,
You must be wondering by now,
What's the point I'm trying to make?
I intend to tell a story,
And this is the lead-up.
Rather lame, isn't it?
You see,
I'm at school,
And establishing a setting,
Harmony Grove High School,
In Camden, Arkansas.
This is where the story begins... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Solmyr1404 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part One (The Intro)

Contributed by Solmyr1404 on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:24:46 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

I sit here looking out the window.
What I'm looking for,
It's not here.
What is it I'm looking for anyway?
I don't know.
It's a bright day,
A blue, cloudless sky.
I see the people,
But, yet, I see through them.
It is as if they are nothing
But a figment of my imagination,
A hologram, if you will.
I look out across the field,
I see memories
Through the transparecies
Of the people in between,
Memories of past love,
Of when I played on it,
Both in football
And as a member of the band.
My sister walks by on her lunch.
Now, in a sense,
I'm looking for someone,
The girl I love but who hates me.
Now the people are crowding my view,
I wish they'd move.
I haven't seen her yet,
You must be wondering by now,
What's the point I'm trying to make?
I intend to tell a story,
And this is the lead-up.
Rather lame, isn't it?
You see,
I'm at school,
And establishing a setting,
Harmony Grove High School,
In Camden, Arkansas.
This is where the story begins...

Copyright © Solmyr1404 ... [ 2004-03-14 02:24:46]
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Re: Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part One (The Intro) (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 03:03:18 AM AEST
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Good write! Keep them coming

Re: Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part One (The Intro) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 04:20:45 AM AEST
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Well good work.
so do u live in Camdon, Arkansas.
I don't live far from there.
I'm in Star City, Arkansas.
Well I'm waiting for the rest of your story.
It's a small world, hug.
luc, huggs,
emy

Re: Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part One (The Intro) (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:20:05 PM AEST
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keep up the good work for the next parts
~allyson~

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