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That was God's plan
Eve was made
With Adam she laid
Children she bore
The veil was tore
Noah built the Ark
He boarded the flock
Moses parted the sea
To set the people free
Peter denied God
Moses had the rod
Joseph was sold
A story was told
David blew the horn
Jesus was born

Gwendolyn Barden

Copyright ©2004 Gwendolyn Barden

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GOD'S PLAN

Contributed by GODSBESTIMAGE on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:10:28 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Adam was a man
That was God's plan
Eve was made
With Adam she laid
Children she bore
The veil was tore
Noah built the Ark
He boarded the flock
Moses parted the sea
To set the people free
Peter denied God
Moses had the rod
Joseph was sold
A story was told
David blew the horn
Jesus was born

Gwendolyn Barden

Copyright ©2004 Gwendolyn Barden

Copyright Â© GODSBESTIMAGE ... [ 2004-03-14 01:10:28]
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Re: GOD'S PLAN (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:14:00 AM AEST
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I think you could sit down and write the whole bible this way.. that will be interesting.. what you did here was very good i liked it. I want more i want more hehe. sandy

Re: GOD'S PLAN (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:24:52 AM AEST
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Very good write!
Luv, huggs,
emy

Re: GOD'S PLAN (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:27:25 AM AEST
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great write...i liked it!

Re: GOD'S PLAN (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:42:03 AM AEST
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I liked this read,well done,
PumpkinPie

Re: GOD'S PLAN (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:51:38 AM AEST
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Mick, I think we need some help with someone. Can those posts be erased? Because they're not entirely constructive...

Beautiful poem. It has a very "bardic" feel. Forgive the pun on your last name.

Keep it up!

Re: GOD'S PLAN (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:09:34 AM AEST
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Hi Godsbestimage,
this is a very good write,you put together the plan of God from beginning
to the end very well done.i like this very much with love .

Re: GOD'S PLAN (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:24:05 AM AEST
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GOOD POEM .
DON'T LET THAT JERK BOTHER YOU.

Re: GOD'S PLAN (User Rating: 1 )
by srugglingyoungster on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:59:16 PM AEST
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very good. end of story. i couldnt put your poem into better words if i tried.

Re: GOD'S PLAN (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:01:39 PM AEST
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OK, everybody, it's gone! You missed it! Some creep posted a nasty comment that included about six cusswords. Posted it eight times. So it's gone ignore the first part of my former comment!

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