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Array ( [sid] => 38529 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pity Party of One [time] => 2004-03-13 22:27:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Shiver in the darkness
When everyone is gone
They no longer care
Did they ever?
Why don’t they like me?
I’m scared and lonely
Alone, alone, alone…
Say it until it is foreign
Another language might
Change the meaning
Make it less bitter to the ears
But the meaning holds
And now I’m surrounded
In self-pity
Yes, I am selfish
If no one else cares—
Why can’t I?
Their stares hurt so much
Dwell on the pain
Maybe they will notice
But then they might see through
To my real self-absorbed self
So stupid, stupid, stupid….
They will never know what
Happens—what dies—when
You’re left stranded and alone
Maybe someone will give
Me more pity, then I won’t
Be so
Alone and scared
Scared of being alone
Grovel and beg so you won’t be

Alone
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Pity Party of One

Contributed by kayald on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:27:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Shiver in the darkness
When everyone is gone
They no longer care
Did they ever?
Why don’t they like me?
I’m scared and lonely
Alone, alone, alone…
Say it until it is foreign
Another language might
Change the meaning
Make it less bitter to the ears
But the meaning holds
And now I’m surrounded
In self-pity
Yes, I am selfish
If no one else cares—
Why can’t I?
Their stares hurt so much
Dwell on the pain
Maybe they will notice
But then they might see through
To my real self-absorbed self
So stupid, stupid, stupid….
They will never know what
Happens—what dies—when
You’re left stranded and alone
Maybe someone will give
Me more pity, then I won’t
Be so
Alone and scared
Scared of being alone
Grovel and beg so you won’t be

Alone

Copyright Â© kayald ... [ 2004-03-13 22:27:26]
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Re: Pity Party of One (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 12:32:11 AM AEST
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Awww this was so sad. I liked it alot though. I certainly can relate because i've had many pity parties for myself. Hang in there with the rest of us and keep on writing! Kie

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