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Array ( [sid] => 38486 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can't Take It [time] => 2004-03-13 13:51:12 [hometext] => You act like you're the queen of the universe now that you have michael. you need to get your head out of your butt and think about the friends your treating like crap! [bodytext] => I get so tired of the way you act
Sometimes I think you really wanna get smacked

You can look at me and all I say
As if I'm some nut you want out of your way

I may be lost and I may not know
But I'm not the one who lets my obsessions flow

I think you're trying to be someone you're not
Not that you've got him, I guess you think your hot

Sometimes we're like best friends
Other times, like this, its the end [comments] => 4 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Angelchild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Can't Take It

Contributed by Angelchild on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:51:12 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I get so tired of the way you act
Sometimes I think you really wanna get smacked

You can look at me and all I say
As if I'm some nut you want out of your way

I may be lost and I may not know
But I'm not the one who lets my obsessions flow

I think you're trying to be someone you're not
Not that you've got him, I guess you think your hot

Sometimes we're like best friends
Other times, like this, its the end

Copyright © Angelchild ... [ 2004-03-13 13:51:12]
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Re: Can't Take It (User Rating: 1 )
by MorbidMongrel on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:57:08 PM AEST
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Once upon a time I was like the person that you're writing about.... Takes a lot to realize what you've done and the people you've hurt in the process. In time she'll see the error in her ways, as I have. Good write!

Re: Can't Take It (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:58:18 PM AEST
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good job! I have a nephew...when someone needs a smack he always says, "you wanna fresh one?" LOL. I think he's hilarious....go ahead...give her a fresh one. If her head ever comes out. rotflmao...great poem.

Re: Can't Take It (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 08:29:01 PM AEST
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I like the way you did this....a great expression of emotions.

Very well done
Roses
Larry

Re: Can't Take It (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:49:14 PM AEST
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Ive been here, it hurts so much when your friends brush you aside like you mean nothing. Excellent poem...well done

Love Dawny x

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