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Intruding into our lives again,
Resurfacing the anger and shame.

Screaming at us your spiteful words,
Slashing our lives with violent spurts,
Destroying our humanity with the grief you hurl.

Bearer of pain,
Our faces have these constant tear stains,
From our torment what do you gain?

The exhaustion sets in after daily fights,
A surge of frustration from this luclkess plight,
It's time to give up because we've tried.

Bearer of pain,
Our sanity has crumbled it wont be the same,
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Bearer of Pain

Contributed by blueheart on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:43:37 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Bearer of pain,
Intruding into our lives again,
Resurfacing the anger and shame.

Screaming at us your spiteful words,
Slashing our lives with violent spurts,
Destroying our humanity with the grief you hurl.

Bearer of pain,
Our faces have these constant tear stains,
From our torment what do you gain?

The exhaustion sets in after daily fights,
A surge of frustration from this luclkess plight,
It's time to give up because we've tried.

Bearer of pain,
Our sanity has crumbled it wont be the same,
I wish you left and never came.

Copyright © blueheart ... [ 2004-03-13 02:43:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bearer of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:50:06 AM AEST
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ohhh hanna, big hugs! this is so well expressed, i hope everything is alright, im here if you want to talk:) love nessa

Re: Bearer of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:56:24 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Bearer of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:27:05 PM AEST
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Excellent poem. The bearer of pain, I wish would just pass me on by! You said it perfectly in this poem. Kie

Re: Bearer of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 03:16:46 PM AEST
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I can feel the pain in this poem, can kind of relate. Very well put together, hope you are ok.

Ali xx

Re: Bearer of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 03:52:51 AM AEST
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Superb piece, your pain is described very well and I feel you. Kudos to ya.

Re: Bearer of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:03:50 PM AEST
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Love it. Your writing is the kind I always search for. I like a taste of everything. I dont get the taste of this type of writing as I often would like to.
Exellent write.

Kisses,
~Soulless~

Re: Bearer of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:37:20 PM AEST
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oh i like this one alot! wow really awesome. good work.
Arden

Re: Bearer of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:24:41 PM AEST
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wow Hanna this is amazing.. i love it.. i don't know why i havent been keeping up with your writes.. i've definitely been missing out! keep it up :)
charlotte x_x_x

Re: Bearer of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:59:32 AM AEST
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In case you were wondering this one is about my grandmother.

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