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Reaching out through ill fated truths
Tarnished arrows pierce your heart
Bleeding for a dismantled dream
Iron fists punch through your walls
Bringing twisted sorrow to its knees
Moistless tears crawl from your eyes
Drowning out the helpless calls
Painless scars peek through your mind
Pushing forth the destined journey
Hollowed answers reign over your doubts
Fighting astrocities to bring you peace... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Lia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

The War in Your Soul

Contributed by Lia on Sunday, 15th September 2002 @ 07:05:34 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Breathless cry heard from your soul
Reaching out through ill fated truths
Tarnished arrows pierce your heart
Bleeding for a dismantled dream
Iron fists punch through your walls
Bringing twisted sorrow to its knees
Moistless tears crawl from your eyes
Drowning out the helpless calls
Painless scars peek through your mind
Pushing forth the destined journey
Hollowed answers reign over your doubts
Fighting astrocities to bring you peace...

Copyright © Lia ... [ 2002-09-15 07:05:34]
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Re: The War in Your Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Sunday, 15th September 2002 @ 12:58:56 PM AEST
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Great write Lia, can hear your soul inside,

Re: The War in Your Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by shepdog1972 on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 02:53:16 PM AEST
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this is real and i love it ...it really speaks when you read it ...so many things go on inside are heads that some times we tend not to see or hear the cries of others tortures that go on inside there heads i hope that you are able to fight these thoughts and i see that you are able to express your thoughts thru your words.......thanks for sharing
john
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