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Our love for each other grows strong,

Through our intamit passion in the yard,
Holding our love from sight is hard,

Both our parents don' t belive,
For the love we both concive,

Yet no one will ever know,
The secret that we hold.

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Forbidden Love

Contributed by TwEeK on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:09:11 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

As each passing day moves on,
Our love for each other grows strong,

Through our intamit passion in the yard,
Holding our love from sight is hard,

Both our parents don' t belive,
For the love we both concive,

Yet no one will ever know,
The secret that we hold.

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-03-13 00:09:11]
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Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:19:19 AM AEST
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Neat poem... it flows... I like it... keep writing...
It's okay that it's short...
~Donna~

Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:28:02 AM AEST
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Length doesn't matter. Content does and you managed to fit a lot of feeling in a few words. You did great. Keep writing.

Rita

Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:29:02 PM AEST
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it might be short, but it in no way reflects how good it is
really sweet, loving poem

Re: Forbidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Dany on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:29:19 PM AEST
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hey how ya doin. great job, and keep writing anyway you feel. if anyone doesn't like it its ok cause the people above an me do!

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