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Now, so Impenitent...
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 03:26:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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And you are here again
to watch my skull turn
inside out.
The skin of my fingers
fills with blood and fluid,
you are here to watch,
you are here again.
Stare, as i heat this needle,
as i slowly impale my eyes one by one,
stare.
See these tears for you,
never fall,
now as i fall...
hear my skull hit the pavement,
a dull thud, crack, splat, splatter..
See my skull turn inside out,
you are here again.
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SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-03-12 03:26:16]
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Re: Now, so Impenitent...
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by LornyaNarFuinenya on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 01:15:58 PM AEST
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| where do i go to read it?? |
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Re: Now, so Impenitent...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:41:49 AM AEST
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| i relate to this poem very so deeply.. when i read it for the first time it touched my heart like no other.. but in a good way this poem touched my heart.. i really like this poem and i give the author 100% good job |
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Re: Now, so Impenitent...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 05:40:55 PM AEST
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| i hope that is not real no one is worth doing that for..very disturbing write but well written |
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Re: Now, so Impenitent...
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 07:19:19 AM AEST
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| well, i can DEFINATLY relate to this. this is great, just called to me (disturbing but good) i feel this....well done...luv phil xxx |
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