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Array ( [sid] => 38308 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Leave Me Here To Die! [time] => 2004-03-11 21:27:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Help me, love!
Help me!
Don't leave me here to die!
It's raining blood and tears.
My heart of stone, laden in ice!
My soul is frail and lifeless.
Ash and dust are what remains.
Of here. Of now.
Of what is real
What could have been.
A fantasy.
Can only be
A fantasy.

The world has turned away from me.
Forgotten friends,
Are shadows in the singing wind.
Forever haunting me.
Forever haunting me.
I can't feel your love!
Are you still here?
My soul is numb!
My frozen heart,
Dripping with blood,
Now icecicles.
Your love, it peirces me.

Where are you, my love.
Are you just a dream?
Are you the empty part of me
That longs to be a part of me?
Day by day
Are you that face I see
When death seems to be
The only way to
Wake me
From this everlasting dream?

Joy has forsaken me.
You are what remains.
You are what is left of me.
Do not forsake me,
Lest I be nothing.
Lest my disguise unfurl
You fill the empty void inside
My soul, my heart,
They bleed.
You're wounding me.
You're wounding me.

Do not forsake me now, my love.
Don't leave me here to die!
You are the only one
The only one
That can hear this silent cry
I whisper your name at night.
Do you hear me?
Do you hear me?
The echoes, your reply.
I've been alone
I've been alone
All of this time
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 379 [topic] => 22 [informant] => SkYYBLu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Don't Leave Me Here To Die!

Contributed by SkYYBLu on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 09:27:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Help me, love!
Help me!
Don't leave me here to die!
It's raining blood and tears.
My heart of stone, laden in ice!
My soul is frail and lifeless.
Ash and dust are what remains.
Of here. Of now.
Of what is real
What could have been.
A fantasy.
Can only be
A fantasy.

The world has turned away from me.
Forgotten friends,
Are shadows in the singing wind.
Forever haunting me.
Forever haunting me.
I can't feel your love!
Are you still here?
My soul is numb!
My frozen heart,
Dripping with blood,
Now icecicles.
Your love, it peirces me.

Where are you, my love.
Are you just a dream?
Are you the empty part of me
That longs to be a part of me?
Day by day
Are you that face I see
When death seems to be
The only way to
Wake me
From this everlasting dream?

Joy has forsaken me.
You are what remains.
You are what is left of me.
Do not forsake me,
Lest I be nothing.
Lest my disguise unfurl
You fill the empty void inside
My soul, my heart,
They bleed.
You're wounding me.
You're wounding me.

Do not forsake me now, my love.
Don't leave me here to die!
You are the only one
The only one
That can hear this silent cry
I whisper your name at night.
Do you hear me?
Do you hear me?
The echoes, your reply.
I've been alone
I've been alone
All of this time




Copyright © SkYYBLu ... [ 2004-03-11 21:27:01]
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Re: Don't Leave Me Here To Die! (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 12:14:13 AM AEST
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That...is poetry. Strong emotions...written with eloquence.


Very, very well done
Larry


Re: Don't Leave Me Here To Die! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 12:20:30 AM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt and powerful:) keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: Don't Leave Me Here To Die! (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 04:34:31 PM AEST
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Wow... i applaud you.. excellent job you captured your thoughts very well.. it was very heartfelt.. i highly enjoyed it..

keep up the terrific work
~neglected1~




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