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Array ( [sid] => 38288 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => curbing pleasure [time] => 2004-03-11 18:48:22 [hometext] => they say love is blind..... [bodytext] => _____________________________
shining like a silver dollar
blinded by possibilities
I thought might exist
willing to pervert myself
to make it mine
slipping into a coma
daydreams full of rhymes
watching the landscape
fly by at 75 miles an hour
breakneck ledfoot
I don't give a damn anymore
it was a foolish attempt
at being cute
when all that is long gone
dressed in black
mourning the past
reckless of me at best
to play with loaded guns
and smoke so many cigarettes
dine on poison alphabets
while keeping you amused
that was a smile I saw
wasn't it?

gmm 2004 [comments] => 6 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 21 [informant] => merry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

curbing pleasure

Contributed by merry on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:48:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

_____________________________
shining like a silver dollar
blinded by possibilities
I thought might exist
willing to pervert myself
to make it mine
slipping into a coma
daydreams full of rhymes
watching the landscape
fly by at 75 miles an hour
breakneck ledfoot
I don't give a damn anymore
it was a foolish attempt
at being cute
when all that is long gone
dressed in black
mourning the past
reckless of me at best
to play with loaded guns
and smoke so many cigarettes
dine on poison alphabets
while keeping you amused
that was a smile I saw
wasn't it?

gmm 2004

Copyright Â© merry ... [ 2004-03-11 18:48:22]
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Re: curbing pleasure (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:06:35 PM AEST
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Great write! Keep up the good work you have a great talent!

Re: curbing pleasure (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:09:52 PM AEST
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Everything she said.
Stitch

Re: curbing pleasure (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:56:51 PM AEST
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oooo gaille, what a moving heartfelt poem, i love every single line and especially this one,"dine on poison alphabet" very clever and insightful as are you, you watch that ledfoot though, we need and love you, hugs nessa
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Re: curbing pleasure (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:08:07 PM AEST
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i feel you. love is blind just like stupid boys who don't give a ***** about a nice mature young lady like me. So keep on doing what you doing.

Re: curbing pleasure (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:00:30 PM AEST
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As soon as you book is on the shelves, I am buying one, sitting in my chair with a cuppa, and reading till I cant read anymore. In all honesty I never tire of your writes.
Beautifully penned,

Roses
Larry

Re: curbing pleasure (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 01:45:03 AM AEST
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Beautiful and emotional. Good job.
Slàinte.
Andrew

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