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Excited
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:33:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's an unknown reason
Why you're the only on
I can think about right now
As I'm walking down the street
Doesn't matter what others think
I'm singing out loud
I've never before
Lost control of my mind
So suddenly
And forgot who I am
I don't know anymore
What's my identity
Since I met you
And talked to you
I've let down my guard
Put all my trust in you
Right or wrong
I'm following my heart
Standing closer to you
With each day
And I hate to leave
I need you to be
To think, to reason
To be happy and simply to breathe
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
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2004-03-11 18:33:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Excited
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:49:40 PM AEST (User
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giddy first date jitters or something? oi pa... breathing is smart, keep doing that! lol, good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Excited
(User Rating: 1 ) by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:58:23 PM AEST (User
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oh how that makes us feel alive, I know how you feel.
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Re: Excited
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:28:19 PM AEST (User
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ohhh simply lovely! may this love bloom for you with the spring flowers:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Excited
(User Rating: 1 ) by faithmairee on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:41:27 PM AEST (User
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very sweet...nice and romantic poem...it left me with a smile on my face...faith |
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Re: Excited
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:27:28 PM AEST (User
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awwww...aint love grand :o)
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Excited
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:28:40 PM AEST (User
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oops...forgot your Roses ;o)
Larry |
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