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Array ( [sid] => 38245 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cant Hide [time] => 2004-03-11 12:23:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => God knows who i am
i need not act at all
he hears me when i laugh
and he hears me when i baul
i can not hide my self
no matter what i be
for my God is the one
who created all of me
at times i must refrain
from acting like a fool
even if at times
it will make me look to cool
so when you see me saying
silly things aloud
remember my dear friends
in me i am proud
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Cant Hide

Contributed by putteragain on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:23:48 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

God knows who i am
i need not act at all
he hears me when i laugh
and he hears me when i baul
i can not hide my self
no matter what i be
for my God is the one
who created all of me
at times i must refrain
from acting like a fool
even if at times
it will make me look to cool
so when you see me saying
silly things aloud
remember my dear friends
in me i am proud

Copyright © putteragain ... [ 2004-03-11 12:23:48]
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Re: Cant Hide (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 02:30:46 PM AEST
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We're not alone! good direct read.
well done once again!

wildejohnny

Re: Cant Hide (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 04:56:29 PM AEST
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note taken, i'll remember that later... but will i see you saying things aloud? or will i even see you at all? *thinking* ... maybe, just maybe. this is good! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Cant Hide (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:04:05 PM AEST
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You say all the silly things you want aloud. Your kids will roll their eyes, but then they will love you for it later. This is a good reminder to us all.
Stitch

Re: Cant Hide (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:05:13 PM AEST
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Oh yes, I remember now. I like this very much. For a long time I didn't think I was allowed to be myself and be a Christian, too. Bawdy can be best!
Stitch

Re: Cant Hide (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:07:23 AM AEST
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This spoke highly of your beliefs and faith. It was said in a sweet, honest and simplistic way. I enjoyed it.

Kie

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