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My name is Melissa, I am 3, I live with my daddy not knowing if he loves me.
He comes home at night with this really strong smell, then comes up to my room and I get wailed.
Uh-oh, shh, I hear him coming up the stairs, he says my name with an angry voice, now i'm scared.
I run to my closet, I sit, I hide, please God make the pain go away inside.
I sit here crying, he heard me I think, he opens the door with a great force, and pulls me out with anger.
"Please daddy no! I've been a good girl, I eat my vegetables, I put my toys away, Oh please daddy stop, just go away!"
My name is Melissa, I am 3, and last night my daddy murdered me.

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Plz daddy don't

Contributed by angelface on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:15:58 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

My name is Melissa, I am 3, I live with my daddy not knowing if he loves me.
He comes home at night with this really strong smell, then comes up to my room and I get wailed.
Uh-oh, shh, I hear him coming up the stairs, he says my name with an angry voice, now i'm scared.
I run to my closet, I sit, I hide, please God make the pain go away inside.
I sit here crying, he heard me I think, he opens the door with a great force, and pulls me out with anger.
"Please daddy no! I've been a good girl, I eat my vegetables, I put my toys away, Oh please daddy stop, just go away!"
My name is Melissa, I am 3, and last night my daddy murdered me.

Copyright © angelface ... [ 2004-03-11 11:15:58]
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Re: Plz daddy don't (User Rating: 1 )
by markie on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:20:24 AM AEST
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I just got back from a sham contest so I'm jaded...It's hard to find real honest ones...Is yours real? If I could find one I'd enter myself but now I'm afraid. I did enter a war poetry contest...I think it's genuine....???? How do we know for sure. I'm gun shy now. $1200.00 shy ...

Re: Plz daddy don't (User Rating: 1 )
by markie on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:23:47 AM AEST
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Oh sorry...me again. That's a heck of a good poem! The poem that won the 20k at the convention was about a sugary, pecan, caramal dessert....does that give you a clue????? evidently poetry.com aka american writers assn. doesn't want to hear about life.... dimwitted clueless b*ards!

Re: Plz daddy don't (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:24:39 AM AEST
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This one sent chills thru me... WOW! What a great write!!! It something u hear of anymore everyday... it makes my heart weep for these lil children out there who can't defend themselves...
Thank you.
Take care.... Godspeed!
~Donna~

Re: Plz daddy don't (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:27:32 AM AEST
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this was sad...but it is good..i liked it..u'll do fine..just be urself!
luv always

Re: Plz daddy don't (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:23:46 PM AEST
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THIS IS MY WINNER FRIEND.. SIMPLE, ANDGELIC, WITH GOOD THEME, AND SWEET ILLUSTRATIVE AND FIGURATIVE EXPRESSION.. IT HAS A DEEP MEANING IN THE LIVES OF OUR SOCIAL ORDER FROM THE FAMILY UNIT. THIS IS MY SUGGESTION FRIEND.... MOVE IT ON TO YOUR CONTEST

Re: Plz daddy don't (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:40:13 PM AEST
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this poem was sad but it is good to see that people are willing to put these kinds of things out there for people to know exist..i think it was heart touching ..this may be your winner..great write andi love the style...goodluck to ya.........slr

Re: Plz daddy don't (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:37:16 AM AEST
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very sad but yet very true theres alot of parents out there that would kill there children..my love goes out to all the little kids that didn't ask to be born but yet was murdered by there own mom or dad......good write but yet very sad........Love AnGel

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