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Think of thoughts so malign
Determine where your essence kept
Dreaming though you never slept
In conscious mind you break away
From sanity you move astray
Winding down, internal roads
Carrying emotional loads
Your falling tears to scar your life
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Suicides illusion

Contributed by forever_lonely on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:39:15 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

To be alone and so confined
Think of thoughts so malign
Determine where your essence kept
Dreaming though you never slept
In conscious mind you break away
From sanity you move astray
Winding down, internal roads
Carrying emotional loads
Your falling tears to scar your life
That final cut from illusions knife

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Re: Suicides illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:58:08 AM AEST
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well wrapped..venkat

Re: Suicides illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:24:43 AM AEST
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excellent:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Suicides illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:26:32 AM AEST
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Great poem.

Re: Suicides illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 09:41:56 AM AEST
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short and very very good. i love this. nicely done.
Arden

Re: Suicides illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:06:16 AM AEST
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This is my kind of write and I love how you did it. It doesnt always take a lot of words to express such deep thoughts as this proves.

Brilliantly written my friend
Larry

Re: Suicides illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by bear8807 on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 10:25:27 AM AEST
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nicely done i like it keep up the good work

Re: Suicides illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:29:03 PM AEST
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This poem is skillfully written, although I'm assuming you didn't take pains in writing this, as it has a mellifluous, yet direct quality to the thoughtstream, which I personally associate with spontaneous expression.
But if it was written painstakingly - congratulations - It was well worth the effort.
5 stars, regardless.

Re: Suicides illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 10:58:16 PM AEST
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wow this is very well put. i guess sometimes it does only take a little bit of words to make a great impact on ones mind. i thought that it was awesome!!!! loved it!

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