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[sid] => 38194
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Please stop.....
[time] => 2004-03-11 01:25:03
[hometext] => *Looks towards the ground* The fallen must sometimes flee when there is nothing left to give or feel but pain.
[bodytext] => Tears run down my face
as blood freely flows.
I miss the touch
that would comfort me.
I miss my shoulder to cry on
and the arms that would hold me.
I hate that I am left alone
again and again.
I hate the failure from myself
and from those around me.
I can not stand the love
that I see in their eyes.
I feel sick by the truth
that suffocates me.
I am not that special.
I am not that important.
You can not keep
leaning on me.
I am going to break.
I hate you
and myself for it.
I allow it because
you need it.
Why will none of you see
that I am dying and that
you are the ones killing me.
Why will you not just let me
cry for this once.
I need it and I am begging.
I am down on my knees
but still none of you see.
I need the comfort this time.
Why can I not keep anything?
Why does everyone leave me?
I have to go now.
I have to run.
I can not stay here.
I am bleeding inside.
I am dying.
Just let me go.
Let me die in peace.
Let me off of this life support.
I can not be there anymore.
I am gone.
Dead inside and I can not
be reborn.
This pain is too much.
Can not be taken any longer.
The knife or the road
and I am beyond caring.
So please
just let me go.
Say goodbye and hug me
one last time.
Everyone has failed me
and I have done the worst.
I am leaving
so pretend I am dead.
Do not track me down.
Just a ghost anymore.
Sorry I must go now.
Raven's Sin
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 260
[topic] => 48
[informant] => Cobalt
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 18
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 0
[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
)
Please stop.....
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:25:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears run down my face
as blood freely flows.
I miss the touch
that would comfort me.
I miss my shoulder to cry on
and the arms that would hold me.
I hate that I am left alone
again and again.
I hate the failure from myself
and from those around me.
I can not stand the love
that I see in their eyes.
I feel sick by the truth
that suffocates me.
I am not that special.
I am not that important.
You can not keep
leaning on me.
I am going to break.
I hate you
and myself for it.
I allow it because
you need it.
Why will none of you see
that I am dying and that
you are the ones killing me.
Why will you not just let me
cry for this once.
I need it and I am begging.
I am down on my knees
but still none of you see.
I need the comfort this time.
Why can I not keep anything?
Why does everyone leave me?
I have to go now.
I have to run.
I can not stay here.
I am bleeding inside.
I am dying.
Just let me go.
Let me die in peace.
Let me off of this life support.
I can not be there anymore.
I am gone.
Dead inside and I can not
be reborn.
This pain is too much.
Can not be taken any longer.
The knife or the road
and I am beyond caring.
So please
just let me go.
Say goodbye and hug me
one last time.
Everyone has failed me
and I have done the worst.
I am leaving
so pretend I am dead.
Do not track me down.
Just a ghost anymore.
Sorry I must go now.
Raven's Sin
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Cobalt
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Re: Please stop.....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:33:29 AM AEST
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It's very powerful poem good job.
Kinda wonder if your talking about yourself? |
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Re: Please stop.....
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:35:40 AM AEST
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wwooo this is nuthing but sad but very well said.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Please stop.....
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:51:44 AM AEST
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| Don't try to understand...but it makes me feel like wanting to run away...hide and never come back. I don't want to be near such pain...I feel it myself and must flee. |
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Re: Please stop.....
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 02:36:14 AM AEST
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| a very sad poem. Just keep loking you WILL find some1 who can heal you, some1 who you can count on to be there for you and when you find them all you have to do is wait, wait to get to know them and for them to know you. It may take along time and you may feel like there is no point but without the journey there is no destination..... |
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Re: Please stop.....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 02:44:19 AM AEST
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| Very emotional..and powerful..I feel really sad after reading this..venkat |
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Re: Please stop.....
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:19:47 AM AEST
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| Very powerful poem, it went straight to my heart and I feel really melancholic now. Well done. |
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Re: Please stop.....
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by thumper on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:30:58 AM AEST
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| wow! Been there, am there. I think we all have a purpose in life and some of us are made to be used and abused. Your expression was very well put. The sentiment hit home,as it should. |
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Re: Please stop.....
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 09:09:53 AM AEST
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very sad, very good expression though
*hugs*
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Re: Please stop.....
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by Kie on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 11:37:49 AM AEST
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| This was so sad it just broke my heart. You have expressed so much deep pain and if I could erase all of it I would. I don't know what to say except that I am deeply moved by this. ((Hugs)) Do not give up! You make think you are dead but I see enormous life inside of you, I do. Kie |
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Re: Please stop.....
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:38:31 PM AEST
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very raw jeff makes me want to give you that last hug such range in emotions you touch them all
michelle |
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Re: Please stop.....
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by Saitou-sama on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:10:37 PM AEST
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| It makes me feel like crying. ::hugs:: |
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Re: Please stop.....
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:45:50 AM AEST
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| very sad i got not even half way and tear's started flowing down my face...nice write though....Hang in there.......TC.........Love AnGel |
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Re: Please stop.....
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 08:50:03 AM AEST
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Powerful and telling. Interesting write.
Stitch |
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